First comment for me!!! MWAHAHAHAHA... anyhoo, I decided to take up that offer you left on my site and read your stories, Brie. You are a very good writer, but I noticed a tiny problem with character developement. Its actually something I've seen a lot in many people's writings (including mine), but it can be fixed. Just practice on developing the physical as well as mental/emotional descriptions, and I'm sure you're character Emir in "Strange Visitor" will improve the storyline and the story's tone a lot. Nothing at all I can see wrong with your poetry. It is very nice. Keep on writing, and I'll see you around the woods.

Brie 'Quin the Almighty' Stark replies: "Thanks! I really appreciate you coming! I was beginning to feel all alone in the woods. I'll definitely take that advice to heart; The Stranger was just a short story made out of boredom, partly to fill up the gallery, hehe, until I can complete several ones I have started. See you 'round the woods! Thanks again!"

hello . saw your (very kind) comment on my page, and thought i would stop by. well, my only complaint is that there's not more up here! you have a kind of graceful style which seems to flow, that you don't see very often...looking forward to more!

Brie 'Quin the Almighty' Stark replies: "Brie says: Thanks so much! All of those comments are true, you know, so you had better add some more onto your gallery! Will be checking back much just to check on you, hehe. Hope to talk to you again! Thanks for the comment!"

*runs in gasping from her dash she took over here after realizing EW was back up* I sincerely appologize for my tardyness! I saw your nice comment on my poem the day before the weekend crash and when I finally had time to come to your gallery I couldn't get there. >.< But I'm here now to thank thee for your lovely comment and to marvel at the fine works here. So I'll not waste any time! Thanks for your comment on my oage! *dashes off to comment on the writtings here*

Brie 'Quin the Almighty' Stark replies: ".... QUIN SAYS; Oh wow, thanks! I really love your works, and I'm especially interested in this 'Mercy' character; buahaha. I once knew a very popular Mercy, and adored her, so I'm very much interested in yours! It's a name that's very dear to me -wink-. Thanks for commenting! MUCH APPRECIATED!"

hey there! thanks for the sweet visit in my gallery! thanks for the supporting words! I think im going to read your stories one day too, but i dont have the time now! See ya! Thanks again!

Brie 'Quin the Almighty' Stark replies: "I hope, when you read my stories, that you find some cool things to critique on-- one more step to perfection! Thanks for the real nice comment!"

Hey, I'm an elfwood person and it didn't say so in eth last comment, evil comment thingy *Glares*
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You are probably teh second most talented 13 year old writer that I have ever met, teh first being my friend Sarah, who is a genius and basiclly no one can compete with ,very nice stuff

Very nice stuff! You're very talented!

Hello
i decided to give a comment to everyone in list sixteen in the list of all the writers because some people didnt have too many comments so here is yours have a great day, and enjoy your comment