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"Tori" by Paul r joves

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 short story about tori , english is second language pls forgive errors


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Tori

Tori expands over many cities and townships but it's
centre is called the hearth of irons for the kingdom is
paved with iron roads and this is where the wealthy resides,
to the south lies a small shanty town where the less fortunate
lives and where the thieves guild resides, a great towering
castle lies west where the council lives and govern all
to the east lies the great ports where traders off all
kinds work by the sea and to the north lies the great
library.

Outside this lies three townships called narn, bastel and
kaser.

narn is a community of elderly where they live peacefully
in a nostalgic community it is the nearest
to the city.

bastel is a community of woodsmen and hunters this is
where the forest of the sithra lies, the forest stretches
over 70 to 80 km of rich lands and contains many animals
and great beast, it is said that in this forest lives a
great witch called omigies who many seeks for her knowledge
in potion making, she was said to know the cure for
the death spell if you were unfortunate enough to be
cursed

a great expands of lands of dessert lies just outside the
forest stretching to the great mountains where the mirror of
time and space lies and in the middle of this great dessert
is a small oasis which contains the city of kaser where
the indigenous community of tori lives,and where the sword
of life was foretold to have been found and later hidden.

In this time of crisis they formed a contingency just in case
their powers were not enought to stop this destruction,
they serched far and wide to find this two strangers one
that causes the destruction and one that will help us stop it

one day the man who is to be the saviour of tori was found but he
tells us of grave news that the destruction has started
only a couple days ago that it has wiped out the city of kaser and was
spreading to the forest as we speak

he said he knows he a barrier spell he can put on but he does not know how long
it will be affective for, and that they must sent out for the finest of tori
to be sent to the past and investigate the matter.

he further advises to send them back about one year before now because this is when the destruction
was supposively planned and this will give them enought time to
stop who ever started this madness

they did as he asked the finest was called and they were put in groups of seven
there were four groups each being sent to diffrent parts of tori, just in case one
group fails or dies there are others to ensure a future for tori....

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'Tori':
 • Created by: :-) Paul r joves
 • Copyright: ©Paul r joves. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Of, Destruction, Toru
 • Categories: Magic and Sorcery, Spells, etc.
 • Submitted: 2012-01-26 03:56:54
 • Views: 110

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