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"a weather to match" by Paul r joves

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 a original short story pls forgive the mistakes  engkish is second language


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A weather to match
you came on a sunny day but then out of nowhere the rain started and then stopped as
you ran for shelter to the next town. There were a bunch of priest who were asking their
god of weather for more rain and as they chant an ancient text, then thunder roared and
they rejoiced they say the lady will give us rain , thank you my lady they all cried out
with glee , you went to one of them and asked why they were celebrating
the leader hears you , and says you must be new to this land, our crops are dying
so as our animals and we too are suffering the lost of rain we missed it like dessert
for the past 3 years or so and now our lady is going to give us rain.

You see our lady has been crossed with us for we have not given thanks for our
great prosperity of our rich soils and the divine weather we always had, we don't rejoice
anymore as we did when rain fell and so she visit us as a form of a stranger , a lady
and she surveyed us until a day when she revealed herself saying to us weren't praising
nor giving thanks to what we were given by her and she rose above the cloud s and opened
her arms then thunder and lightning boomed and it became dark she said here is the
last rains you shall have till you became more thankful for what is freely given to you,


and then great rain fell for 20 days and then it stopped , it has been 3 years now and soon
the rain will come once more for we are starving and thirsty
Our supply is low and if we don't get this we will all surely die.
the earth once so rich with goodness now bare and dry , now the great lady has forgiven us
we shall see rains again
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'a weather to match':
 • Created by: :-) Paul r joves
 • Copyright: ©Paul r joves. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Weather, Tori, Fantasy
 • Categories: Magic and Sorcery, Spells, etc.
 • Submitted: 2012-01-26 03:56:54
 • Views: 122

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