| 20 Nov 2002 |  Joey8 | Weeeeee!! Hello! I get to be the first to comment, yey! ^_^ I can see the beginnings of a good writer here! Keep up the good work and write more stuffs! I just have a feeeew friendly little tips. Try to make your poems flow a bit more. Most of your lines are really short. Just work on 'em a bit more and they'll be perfect! ^_^ Good luck with your writing!!   Mona Muhr replies: "Thanxs a lot for your help and that you commented here. I'm so honored! *runs off to write a new poem*" | |
| 30 Nov 2002 |  Katie A. O' Gorman | Hey Ramona! When I saw you were writing I had to come and check your stuff out! It's brilliant, the only tip I can offer you is to not be afraid of using long paragraphs and letting your work flow. Keep it up!  Mona Muhr replies: "Hi! Nice to see you around again! I have to check out your site again soon. Oh and thanx!!" | |
| 21 Dec 2002 |  Adam Hunt | You have lotsa talent, cool! I like 'burning cities', don't know why I chose that one over your others though... oh well. Keep up the good work!  Mona Muhr replies: "*does the third comment dance*" | |
| 14 Apr 2003 | Cheyenne | HAHAHAHA You added more very impressive. | |
| 9 Jan 2004 |  Chyaz Samuel | Ramona is Avril Lavigne's middle name! I am an Offical Avril Lavigne Lookalike! Check out www.look-a-likes.com and click on Musicians if you want to see my lookalike picture!
Drop a comment my way sometime!
Love Chyaz ^_^ | |
| 28 Jun 2005 |  Larry N. Morris | Comgratulations for being selected Writer of the Day.
I read a couple of your poems. Nice work--just different than mine. My poems are more like ballads. Oh well, each of us has their own mind.
Keep them coming.
If you would be interested in a site that is mainly for poetry, let me know. | |
