| 8 Oct 2001 |  Rhiannon Dariyan Daymond-King |  Loading...So what does everyone think of my poetry? Especially Lost Land and Beserker, Balchoth Firimar and West? | |
| 28 Oct 2001 | Jesster | Loading... Heh heh heh..Speak softly, for I carry a sword.. | |
| 28 Oct 2001 | Jesster | Loading... When I said about the demon, I meant ask me @ school, cause I SHOULD bring her.If I don't, you may beat me.gently. | |
| 28 Oct 2001 | Jesster | Loading... Hey, one thing I've noticed about your stories is they seem to move really fast,in the time sense at least.
This seems to detract from their realism.
When you slow down and mention detail, the writing is great.
Methinks if you didn't try to encompass such big time-scales in short stories it would be much better.
The Elves first story really should have been two, the one when they were children seperate.
That's really all I've got to say except if you read this before monday, ask me about the library demon.
(Heck, ask me about the library demon anyway) | |
| 10 Jan 2002 | Salamander_DeathReaper | Loading... 1) Jess... you're an idiot.
2) we must plot to kill the library demon at school when it starts
3) Cool stories
4) er.. | |
| 31 Jan 2002 |  Rhiannon Dariyan Daymond-King | Loading... 1) It's the SECOND story you're talking about. 2)Go ahead and plot to kill the library demon... I shall listen extra hard from my house for maniacal laughter coming from the west-south-west. Until March when I will not be at home during the day (ah no 7 hour weekdays of study!!!) 3)Thanks. 4) Must write some more short stories... goodness knows I have the time right now... 5) Ow, sunburn! And sore shoulders!! Ow! 6) Hmmm, maybe the story of The Intrepid Kaipara River Adventurers is forthcoming? 7) Maybe not.  Am I ever going to get tired of doing bullet points? 9) Yes, probably 10) Bye! | |
| 26 Feb 2002 | Salamander_DeathReaper | Loading... well aren't these comments old?
I will write part 2 of the Naeramarth series.. hmm.. i think i'll call it The Thingy Cronciles - as suggested by Jessie..
whadoyathink? | |
| 10 Aug 2002 |  Sashiell | Loading... Wow, very nice writing. You have pretty good ideas that could go a long way. Oh by the way, you can answer these ppl in the extranet (with a writer's reply and such) saving you a lot of space  | |
| 19 Aug 2002 | Alexander Gleadow | Loading... Hello; i técala n?írima harma. Your writting is a beautiful treasure. Well done. Rhiannon Dariyan Daymond-King replies: "yay, someone knows Elvish!! *i Elda linda* I hate the way any accented or whatever letters turn out strange on this computer... e with an accent turns into a question mark and so on... so you can't get to one page properly, the Edheli Utulie story. the address is all the normal stuff, like one of my other stories, but with edheliutulie.html.html spelled with the e with a diaresis or umlaut on top, which is alt-0235. I hope that works then. thanks!" | |
| 22 Feb 2004 | Rhiannon Dariyan Daymond-King | Loading... So they decided my story with Elves in was 'not suitable for another reason' and didn't put it up. I really cannot fathom why. Nor can I understand why they did not put my poem 'Lifebond' up when it is clearly much more about fantasy than the one they DID put up, 'Mindshadow'. I will put 'Lifebond' up on my poetry site at http://www.geocities.com/avonderiel_tran_amantharel/index.html (or lifebond.html) I'll try and put my story up there as well or at least with a link. | |
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