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"Enter the Lair" by Renee Reizman

SF&F Picture 1 out of 10 by Renee Reizman

Just a poem written. A very bad one, but I tried to make it a little scary.

In the shadows the noise grows

Louder and louder it seems.

The whirling of sounds,

the fear that grips

a vice squeezing all the courage.

Deep and dark

the way it seems,

any who go never come back.

Take up your sword, be the one

who beats that beast that lurks in there.

Step by step,

travel slow.

No one knows if you'll ever come back

and you don't know.

Date	Name	Comment
12 Mar 2002	J. Gilbert Coates	Loading... I like it, simple yet tells an entire story... that last line though.... maybe something more simple like ~ will you? ~ just an idea. Namaste. Renee Reizman replies: "I know what you mean. I had a hard time thinking up of a last line for that. I might change it to that, I'm not sure. Thanks for the tip."
22 Jan 2003	Crystal R. Russell	Loading... Oooh, I love this! It isn't badly written at all! I love the line about "take up your sword". Great imagery there.
4 Jan 2004	Christina Ballee	Loading... Hey, I think this is a really good piece. I also write poetry and things of that sort, so maybe we could compare our pices in school some time.

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About 'Enter the Lair':

• Status: OK
• Created by:

Renee Reizman
• Copyright: ©Renee Reizman. All rights reserved!

• Keywords: Beast, Fear, Horror, Fantasy
• Categories: Dragons, Drakes, Wyverns, etc
• Views: 168

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