|28 Sep 2005|| Cricket|
Welcome to Elfwood Roland! I'm not a member, but I come here all the time and like to leave lots of comments. I've read you're stories. I think you're a good style, you're stories don't leave me wanting to bang my head on the desk in confusion or annoyance, but they do need to be fleshed out more, especially the "Perfect Society?" one. I left more specific comments with the stories.
Anywho, good luck, and keep writing! Roland Gromes
replies: "Thanks for your kind words. And I'm really happy about any constructive critisizm of my works."
|29 Sep 2005|| Larry N. Morris|
A hearty welcome to Elfwood from me as well.
You can collect those comments and crits. Visit other writers and leave helpful comments on their work. Most of them wil return the visit and soon you'll be knee-deep in comments. Roland Gromes
replies: "I know, but thanks anyhow. I'll try to do so."