Great stuff you got here!!!
I like your style, keep it up!

Rhys 'Dunlavy' Romero replies: "thanks for being a fan, hehe"

Hey, great job on the site Glad you finally got it up.

Rhys 'Dunlavy' Romero replies: "yes, thank you. Unfortunatly i have alot of work to do. I wouldn't exactly call 2 stories a brag right."

*waves cheerily* hello!
Poem... Yep!
You, again, have lovely plot... Very, very emotional... You did a good job with the emtions...
The words were well chosen and how you wrote it was very effective
my quirk is that you don't have a definite rhyme scheme and your meter jumps all over the place... Typically you want an even meter and a constant rhyme scheme...
But the words and how you wrote this is just beautiful!!
Let me think a bit longer on the title... I'm so honoured to read this (and sorry i couldn't do it till now... The friend i was speaking about last night as the one i was gaining is leaving for a long time going back to college, so i had a looong convo there *nods nods*) but yes... Thank you so much for sharing this poem with me... I will let you know soon as a fitting title comes to mind... Thank you for the honour!!

hey thx alot for your comment! Nice stuff you got here!

Hiya!!! This is what I call Awesome hehe You are a talented writer and I cant wait to see more up here. I shall return in do time...muah hah hah hah haaaaaa
-Kristin

Hiya, Rhys. Thought I'd come and say hi there, and all. I'll peruse your library in short order, too; right now, though, I'm going to bed. 'night!