| 22 Nov 2003 | Holly Knobloch | I really like your marked black story! its so good so far! i only got to the 2nd chapter but i'll be back to read more! great job!  | |
| 4 Dec 2003 | Holly Knobloch | hey! thanks for stoppin by my page...i would love it if you sent me your marked black stories!! but you gotta send it to my hotmail account cause my aol is being stupid and isn't working right now *shakes fist at computer* thanks lots i'm off to read more of your work!  | |
| 6 Dec 2003 | Holly Knobloch | HEY! thank you sooo much for sending me your marked black story i can't wait to read them! thanks again! bye bye! | |
| 8 Dec 2003 | Sarah E. Askew | I dont have enuff time to read all you stuff but what i did read so far was great! Ill be sure to come back later after ive finished my school work tomorrow and read the rest!! Great stuff keep writing! | |
| 19 Dec 2003 | Miguel Francis Ettema | Greetings. You dropped by my library, I'm dropping by yours  Some nice poems you got going here, and the tale looks good; I'm intrigued about what original tale was about, but I can understand the scrapping of a tale. I did the same with one after 120 pages... just wasn't happy with the way it was turning out. Anyhow, thanks for dropping by, and feel free to read more; more comments are always welcome, and not all my work is comedy  Keep Writing! | |
| 30 Dec 2003 | Holly Knobloch | I finally finished all your marked black stories..It took forever because i was sick and i'm finally better! But i love it! Keep up the good work! Bye bye! | |
| 11 May 2004 | Some chick from texas | Hola sir, i just wanted to say that i really enjoyed The Beginning, and your mother makes great tortillas.....need the recipe or whatever...lol e-mail me and see if you can guess who this is sincerely, some chick from texas  Ricky N. Barnett Jr. replies: "Thank you Sister-named, and I'll tell mom you liked her tortillas... i like em too! Mmm Mmm Mmmmm....better than cambels! uh... yeah srry i haven't had much sleep...its already been four hours!" | |
| 12 May 2004 | Are gay hater | hey are gay, i found ure stories....WAIT A SEC i didnt read them. my bad  Ricky N. Barnett Jr. replies: "Um... Yeah, adam, you are like the 54th comment! you deserve a prize! but i'm not gonna give you one... cause i'm broke...ok ..." | |
| 15 Sep 2004 | SMILES | Hey it's me again! I have been reading alot of your stuff lately! And I am totally impressed! I never would have guessed that you were such an incredible writer! You surprise me with something new all the time! I've known you for awhile but I had no clue that this was a part of you! I am totally impressed RJ! Good job! Keep writing and never stop because you are truly talented! Don't ever let that go to waste! Hope to read more from you soon! Love ya PS...how bout you smile a little! | |
| 30 May 2007 | CK Miller | Just leaving a note for all the Elfwood Writers!
The Keys to becoming a successful author! Take care of them. - you must always remember this when you are writing. Sight, sound, taste, smell and feeling! They are simple, but many times, if you miss one of these, the book or story just isn’t what it could be! Don’t be afraid to describe in depth of what you see. Your readers don’t know your world. If you want to show them exactly what you are creating, you need to be specific! | |