| 27 Jan 2003 | Aaron Weaver | Loading...Looks good for a start but the buildings could use some details. | |
| 14 Feb 2003 | Anonymous | Loading...Beautiful, you depicted the shining city almost as i had imagined it. Dragonmount is even rising above it in the back ground.luv it  | |
| 26 Dec 2003 | SEODRohan | Loading...This looks really cool, except the bridge closest to us is just a bit steep. I imagine ppl just falling down it as they try to cross. Other than that, very good depiction. | |
| 25 Jan 2004 | Ali | Loading...I really love Dragonmount in the background. It adds a familiar detail to the fans of the book like myself. Though I do think Tar Valon itself could use some details. | |
| 29 Mar 2004 | Dubya | Loading...Awesome pic, other than those out-of-place buildings in the foreground. The White Tower is amazing, but the island looks a little small to hold a city and the tower. Maybe it's just the distance/perspective thing. And, wasn't there supposed to have been a battle on the slopes of dragonmount? It'd be pretty darn tough to keep your footing, let alone fight on that mountain (though it is a cool looking mountain). | |
| 10 Jul 2005 | Solyn | Loading...I may not be an artist, but I think that you're one of the best I've seen. I must point out a thing or two though. One-Dragonmount is much, much farther away from Tar Valon than you show it. It may be prespective, but it is a lot farther away than you picture it. It says so in Newspring. Two-Dragonmount is really, really tall. Even bigger than the Moutains of Mist. It disappears in the clouds if my memory serves me. Three-The island does in fact look a little small to house such a large, great city. I just wanted to point that out to you. | |
| 8 Aug 2006 | Rachael | Loading...I think this is a really good picture, with good perspective. i think it fits the description of the shining walls from the book really well. | |
| 18 Mar 2009 | Anon. | Loading...thats so ****e haha | |
| 2 Oct 2009 | Beyla Sedai | Loading...wow awsome! i think dragonmount is further away but i love the bridges and the tower | |
| 9 Jul 2010 | Inc | Loading...It’s an Aes Sedai factory! | |