Oliver: Cool I like both stories

Pam: Well I like them better then you!

Tip: *snort* I was probably the only one to read them

Oliver: Oh yeah? well we'll see abou...

Default: SHUT UP YOU GUYS geez are you 2 years old or what?!

Tip: *mumbling* I liked the first one slightly more than the second.

Elisabeth Rosenthal replies: "thanx... uh, who's Tip?"

Great stories. And I think that I like them better than Pam or Oliver or Tip or Default or any of her other personalities.

Elisabeth Rosenthal replies: "Thanx^^"

Now I have read one, and left a comment. I think you are an amazing author and should keep writing. Is there any way you can put your art into your stories? If you can, do so! I hope my comment on "Prophecy" proves helpful.

Elisabeth Rosenthal replies: "Your comment on "Prophecy" was helpful^^ Thanks"

I havent
read andy yet but
there is coolness because it si.

I want the fish! Gives it to us! Or face the white rabbit!
fuzzy, just like the assylum.

Elisabeth Rosenthal replies: "Not... the WHITE RABBIT!!!!!"

You write very well and your characters are interesting and well developed but your running theme of supporting homosexual marriage is tired and detracts from the story.

Elisabeth Rosenthal replies: "Well, I write about what interests me, and that does... I'm glad you think my writing's good anyways."

All your stories are very good and very well written. Check out my stuff (it's not as good as yours though....)

Elisabeth Rosenthal replies: "Thanks^^ *runs off to go check out your gallery*"

Comment From the Writer: Hi... just letting you guys know that (as I've added to my bio, which hasn't been changed yet) you can now find my fanfictions at fanfiction.net/~arsinyk and more of my original stories at fictionpress.com/~arsinyk.

Me again. Sorry reread comment and I did not say what I meant. What I was trying to say was that the format (short story) forces you to be too blatant. For example in "Without Hailey" you are unable to truly explore the depth of emotion that the characters must feel about this subject; so at the end when they were allowed to get married the reader does not get a real picture of how the characters must feel about this. Since this issue has been driven into the ground by the media it does not have the same emotional impact as it could if either A.) we had heard less about this issue or B.) you were not constrained by space and the reader could better get to know your characters. Neither of which is your fault. Make more sense now?
Anyway you clearly have talent so please keep writing I do enjoy your work.

Elisabeth Rosenthal replies: "ahh... That makes more sense. Thanks^^Actually, I was thinking of making a sequal to Without Hailey, or at least writing more about the characters..."