| 21 Jan 1999 |  Raven |  Loading...Oh, jeez, you scared me! I thought for sure you were the Ryan Schmidt that I've known for eight years! But nope, he's not 18  | |
| 21 Jan 1999 |  Christina E. Brönnestam | Loading... (same as above) Oh my God, how do I write my name today? Now we got it right, sorry. | |
| 21 Jan 1999 | Bronne | Loading... Hi Ryan and welcome to the Library. You know, I've also written about a blacksmith boy, but that is not the reason to why I like your writing so much. I read all the three chapters in one sitting and I am at loss of words ... well, almost. Separate comments will follow to the chapters. My warmest congratulations to this story, I think it is excellent! | |
| 23 Jan 1999 | Ryan | Loading... Thank you so much Christina, everything you've told me has been very much appreciated. I look forward to having your insight on some other writings I do and I can't wait to read some of yours. | |
| 26 Mar 1999 | Jevan Sinnock | Loading... A neighbor in the library and this is the first I've been here. A comment on the third chapter mentions slipping tenses, but it's truly noticeable (still probably something good to work on, though). I did notice spelling (sorry, a pet-peeve of mine) needs a little work at some points, but it doesn't hurt the tale at all. It's a great read and very intriguing. | |
| 14 Feb 2000 |  Andrea Nichole Walker | Loading... Hey *Waves and stuffs* ... Yeah... ...hum... ... ...... ... .... well... Yeah. Hey. | |
Ryan T. Schmidt
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