|13 May 2006|| Evren W.|
NOOOOOOO! Not dead! dead good most of the time... this time dead not good! oh well... oh but I likes how you drew this picture... There is lots of emotion in it and I like it! Keep it up! =) Marcus W. Ager
replies: "Thanks for the positive feedback ^^. BTW, Dael may not stay dead, he might be resurrected at some point. Or maybe I'll be mean and make someone raise him as a zombie. Buahaha!"
|18 Jul 2006|| J.N. van Betteray|
On second glance. Is he wearing no pants? Stop drawing charaters with no pants on! Marcus W. Ager
replies: "yea, working on that, hehe."
|18 Jul 2006|| J.N. van Betteray|
Someone.... zombie? Wait.... are you talking about Kain? *big smile* You ruined the entire story.... or.... it's just my overactive imagination again.
All hail Kain!!! Marcus W. Ager
replies: "heeheehee, I could clarify this, but I think I'll just sit back and watch you squirm with the possible implications *commences sitting back*"
|20 Jul 2006|| M. Job|
I lvoe the emotion you portrayed. Excellent! Marcus W. Ager
replies: "Thanks, glad you like it! ^^"
|24 Sep 2006|| Jenny C Witt|
OMG this is so sad! Im gunna cry if I look at this too long! bring him back! I love their faces! So much pain, like her teeth, the way u have done that little line across them! Its good!
Not entirely sure I know where her legs are going? . . . . . Perhaps. . . . . A little colour may help to clear this up? Hee hee!
Fab pic! Marcus W. Ager
replies: "Thank you, I'm glad you like it ^^. If you think that's sad you should take a gander at my stories. I'm so mean to poor Wren, hehe =P. Yea, I'm totally going to have to do a colored pic eventually...I keep putting it off XP. I'm too busy right now though, I barely have enough time to do any drawing much less try out a new thing. Maybe next vacation or something 0.o. Oh and she's supposed to be kneeling, btw. Thanks for the comment!"
|10 Dec 2006|| Elmfairy|
The expression and the heads are really good, this shows the pain they're suffering from.
But then the picture gets a bit messy. the anatomy isn't so well, you should buy a book about drawing of antatomy. I did and I'm so getting better. And fast. It really helps, and when you don't know you can look it up. That's very handy. You should especially look at the legs and arms becaus I think that's your problem.
exept from that: great pic.
(I'm sorry if I'm being rude or something. Or when I've hurt your feelings, I'm only trying to help and I really thing you're going to be good!) Marcus W. Ager
replies: "Thankee for the advice! ^^ You needn't worry about hurting my feelings or anything, the reason I post my stuff on Elfwood is so that I can get better, I love it when I receive critiques like this one ^^. I'll try and get an anatomy book. I do have a How To Draw Manga book that goes a lil into the whole circles and tubes thing, but I haven't used it as much as I thought I would...I should proly check it out more ^^. And btw, some of the messiness might be from the fact that this is a small picture, so it looks sorta grainy =P. Thanks again for your comment!"
|13 Dec 2006|| Joyce Smets|
Do you know FARP on this site, It has a lot of art guides. If you're looking for advice to approve you really should go and check there
elmfairy Marcus W. Ager
replies: "alrighty, I'll check those out some time ^^"
|16 Jun 2008|| Uuhhh....|
Great drawing, but...why is it "Censored"? Sure, They’re not wearing pants, but... Marcus W. Ager
replies: "It’s "censured" because I set the picture violence/sex category to "teen," because the description of the teen category is "people with wounds but no nudity per say" =P
Glad you liked it ^^"