| 10 Nov 2002 | Candice S. 'Jaheira' Brown | Loading...*does first comment dance* Wow, these first comment dances are tiring! Lol.
Sorry about the lack of criticism but I liked all your stories/poems. They're all so different. You are good at writing in a wide range of styles. Keep it up. I'm certainly visiting here often in the future. | |
| 1 Oct 2003 | D Joelle Duran | Loading...There should be more comment here! *stamps foot*
I really enjoyed all your poems. They were very skillfully done, and engaging at the same time. Good luck on getting published! | |
| 21 Oct 2003 | ´Disco´ Vic Alfieri | Loading...howdy, and welcome to your first comment from Vic Alfieri, I am a poet, a poetry writer, a writer of poems if you will. I'm so jealous now though, i think more people deserve mods choice awards for poetry, which is not to that yours suck or anything, they're brilliant.
I loved The Song of Princess Profa and The Mink and the Hairy Man. They were awesome, though in some parts (which i will tell you about in an e-mail if you wish) the flow of The Song of Princess Profa is a bit long.....if ya know what i mean. We all have these issues though, and i'm not one to not have this problem with flow.
I actually came here as a recommendation from another EW WL member and am glad i did.
p.s EW = Elfwood and WL = Wyvern's Library | |
| 7 Dec 2004 | Frankie | Loading...I LOVE THE MINK AND THE HAIRY MAN. lol, had to say that. i read that poem of yours like every 6 months since freshman year (i'm a junior now) it is soooooo good. i love it! | |