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Ryan Sanura Reynolds-Stickney

"I Didn´t Say" by Ryan Sanura Reynolds-Stickney

SF&F Picture 3 out of 16 by Ryan Sanura Reynolds-Stickney
 
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A very strange love poem for a very strange love.
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Come
Come with me
The world is full again, and green
Tendrils, reflections of spirals rise
from the ice in the glass
and the flame is new
and my lungs burn with summer
Water speaks,
euphony with the voices of toads and cicadas
who scold
the sulfur and hiss which kindled my midnight oil
It is full in the world and
the moon is open, it is fitting

I will show
You --
Flying is not hard
without sleep, even without a
magnolia wind
because the bamboo is not here
Feathers fly You
It is ours
Seventeen.

The flame is still.
Still
as water, it writhes when touched
Feline, in tactile ecstasy
shuddering with langorous
Pangs of truth.
Born is the wait
I can taste the solstice

I never have to ask
Don't you see?
You know. Only ever lonely
specifically
I want to walk
Well
Fly

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24 Jul 200445 Ally
Amazing. I haven't visited in quite a while, so I'm surprised that this one doesn't have any comments yet. I enjoyed this poem immensely.
29 Jul 200445 Tony
Sigh, I just read this. This poem gives off so many emotions... mmm, I almost don't know how to feel about it. It's like raw emotion laid out on a page so beautifully, the feelings are so obviously deep. Knowing the inspiration for almost all of it makes it no less remarkable, but it's still hard to decipher at times. There's joy tinged with despair, frustration mingled with peaceful bliss, always the urge to fly... OMG, I love that very last part. Mmm, this is a fun poem to discuss.
27 Nov 2005:-) M. DalaneAurelaPhen Abdou
It is very wonderful and so beautiful
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About 'I Didn't Say':
 • Status: OK
 • Created by: :-) Ryan Sanura Reynolds-Stickney
 • Copyright: ©Ryan Sanura Reynolds-Stickney. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Say, Feline, Tactile, Fire, Water, Glass, Tendrils, Rising
 • Categories: Lycanthrope, Were-folk, etc, Romance, Emotion, Love
 • Views: 222


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