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"Hope" by Sarah-amy haley

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A Haiku.

I wrote this when I was feeling really peaceful and happy ~ Then realised the syllables were all wrong. Think I've sorted it now though!?

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Blessed by Angels’ kiss,

Hope’s gift, the light to follow,

Darling, guided one.

←- Gift Of Tears | Immortal Truth -→

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25 May 2007:-) Désirée Dippenaar
Hoo! Short but very nice! ^^ And sweet~ It has a very peaceful feeling to it. I like it! ^.^

*first comment dance*

1 Sarah-amy haley replies: "Yay, my stuff came up and I didn't even know it!"
30 May 2007:-) Angela Perry
Yay, haiku! I have never attempted this form because I am a coward. But this is lovely. I have no nitpicks. *stand in awe and admires little glistening poem jewel*

2 Sarah-amy haley replies: "No nitpicks? None? Yay, maybe that's the secret of spelling, if I split everything into 17 syllable chucks maybe I'll suddenly be able to do it... Agg, I just spelt chuncks wrong! Perhaps not! Anyway, glad you like it. 12 "
25 Jul 2007:-) Krystal J Crawford
Very, very good! I really like it! Your very talented!

1 Sarah-amy haley replies: "Thank you, I'm very, very flattered now : )"
11 Sep 2007:-) Love B. sandquist
Never really understood how to write haiku
but that doesn't stop me from apreciating it2
looks like it took quite a bit of talent to...

1 Sarah-amy haley replies: "Not sure I understood haiku when I wrote it - hence having to change the last line after realising it was all wrong *sigh* They're fun though. Glad you appriciated it! "
1 Nov 2007:-) Zoe Lorinda Cowen
Nice, short poem. 13 words and i'm already confused but it was very peaceful and made me feel happy- actually i'm only saying that because your looking over my shoulder- i'm actually furiously jelous!

47 Sarah-amy haley replies: "Well you have nothing to be furiously jealose about so I shall take your first (sincere!...meh) compliment without feeling guilty. And now direct people to Zoe's page, to prove you have nothing to be jealous of! - People~ it's to your left..."
6 Apr 200845 Jeremiah
What am I where am i oh yeah peacefull

:-) Sarah-amy haley replies: ":- ) .... you want a map? ... Thanks!!"
4 Jun 2008:-) Sy Maniac Sun
nice haiku
i write them 2
but need 2 w8 4 my ticket

:-) Sarah-amy haley replies: "Thank you!! Let me know when your ticket comes up and I’ll be over to read - :- )"
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About 'Hope':
 • Status: OK
 • Created by: :-) Sarah-amy haley
 • Copyright: ©Sarah-amy haley. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Angel, Blessed, Hope
 • Categories: Angels, Religious, Spiritual, Holy
 • Views: 948


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