490 visitors... I think that this is one of the most fun stories I've read in a while. you need to put the next few chapters up, soon, or I may lead the revolt that seems to be forming to demand more. *chuckles* I really like your style!

Congratulations! You have officially been added to my Favorites list. Consider yourself bookmarked! I love your writing style. Bah! Now my own stories seem pathetic in comparison. Hmph. Well, maybe I'll get a Wyvern's shelf of my own someday. That way my friend will be happy.

My stupid hard drive crapped out, and my favorites list was lost...so...um...consider yerself bookmarked again! Anyway...I love your story, Talin's gotta be me fave character.

I still have your duct tape.

Hey Sarah. I love the Kaziah stories so far. I can't wait to read the rest of them. I am currently trying to become an elfwood writer, but am having some difficulties joining. N E Wayz, keep up the good writing

Hey, remember me? Oh, you probably don't, because you <i>don't call,</i> you meanie. You're so mean, you'll make the freshmen cry, and they'll revolt, and you won't notice because you'll be asleep, and you won't wake up because you're you, and if someone tries to warn you, they can't because you locked the door, and to wake you up they'll have to throw socks at you, and, and, call!!
P.S. You either forgot to post chapter 6 or you named chapter 6 chapter 7.
P.P.S. I still find it funny that the only way we could wake you up was throw socks at you...
P.P.P.S. "Oh look, my ride's here! And it's a huff! I think I'll leave in it!"
-<i>Will & Grace</i>

What is this Sarah? There tis no chapter six! Tsk Tsk. I am in agony in the waiting for the sixth chapter. I guess I could always get Ellen to tell me sometime in school, but it tis not nearly as good as reading it in detail. Get to work you silly person! What is this about waking you up with socks, ai? Unusual... I guess Ellen could tell me about that too hehe... Well Good Day Sarah who I have only met once for about two minutes. *chuckles*

Sarah Ann Waggoner replies: "Oh look, I've learned how to respond to comments. Chapter six got nabbed by the mods for having a few sentences of untranslated Elvish- I added the translations in a footnote, submitted again, and it should be up soon, I hope. Chapters eight and nine are in the works, the only problem being that chapter nine is completed while chapter eight is not! Thanks for the attention . . . -Sarah"

Wow....wow. *Looks at dictionary for something even slightly intelligent to say and fails* Wow....
That was, without a doubt THE best thing I've read since, like, sixth grade (I happen to be going into 10th) Hey, wait a minute, you CAN'T end it there!!! You've just taken your audience and thrown them over a cliff!! HOW do you expect us to wait for the next section, HOW? So much drama. You said this story was a spin off of a fairy tale ending 'Happily ever after?' I certainly hope so. These characters are just to good to have the story end misserably. I think I like the ironic parts best. That, and, of course, The whole triangle thingy ma-bobber.
*Must wait anxously for next chapters* *Must not stare at screen any longer...* *Flounces in general direction of next piece, and hits wall* ugh. Owie. Next time warn a girlfriend fore ya do that!!!! WEll, until next piece/s are put up (hopefully for your audience, who is still hanging over the cliff on a VERY SMALL piece of dental floss, will be soon), See ya!

Yue.

i CAN'T BELEIVE you are nto first and foremost a writer! You are amazingly good!! But since I see the last comment for Chapters 8 & 9 was like 2004 and earlier! I probably won't get more of this wonderfully wonderful story for a while. *sniffles* Although I can still beg *evil grin* PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLSEAE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PRETTY PLEASE WITH SUGAR, SPRINKLES, AND CHERRIES ON TOP ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I like your story. Please continue with it as fast as possible. I want to continue reading...