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Sarah ´DarkWhysper´ Hylton

"Hunted" by Sarah ´DarkWhysper´ Hylton

SF&F Picture 3 out of 5 by Sarah ´DarkWhysper´ Hylton
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Why you shouldn't go into the woods at night.
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Hunted

wondering through the night
I hear a mournful call
The voice is not quite human
and my flesh begins to crawl
The sound is getting closer,
howling in my ears
The night is closing in
heightening all my fears
I’m frozen to the spot
too afraid to run
I can feel it moving in
it seems the beast has won
Red eyes watch me from a distance
just beyond the trees
My entire body shivers
fear brings me to my knees
As I raise my head up slowly
and see the beast at last
all that's left to do
is pray that it goes fast
 
 
 
 

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13 Nov 2001:-) Helen 'Fuzzy Phoenix' Graves
I'm impressed the way you manage to keep a rhyme going through this! It really adds to a suspensful atmosphere with the pace. *Applaudes*
24 Apr 200245 Sam 'DarkHawke' Beaven
Very suspenseful and suitably fast paced.
10 Sep 2005:-) Sara Joette Hoppe
Wow, wonderful, very suspencful. This is publishing, make it big material!
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About 'Hunted':
 • Status: OK
 • Created by: :-) Sarah ´DarkWhysper´ Hylton
 • Copyright: ©Sarah ´DarkWhysper´ Hylton. All rights reserved!

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