| 24 Feb 2002 |  Daddy | I think your writing has depth, and motion. as well as emotion. I am not sure what you are saying but you have said it well anyway. | |
| 26 Feb 2002 | Bethany | Hiya! Very impressive! I know you have more poems out there. =) Post em' already! Your writings are really good, but then I've told you that before. Keep writing and be sure and remember me when your famous. E-Mail!   Heather J. Sargent replies: "trying but i'm only puting them up in 2's and 3's." | |
| 27 Feb 2002 | EALGA :)> <(: | it's all good but i didn't realize that at the top of 'chid of the night' it says that it's about a vamp...sorry...but i agree with bethany...you need to put more on here...show tose amitures how it's really done...oh, before i for get did you ever put any of your sketches on here??? call me the day that you read this and tell me what you think about me puting some of my drawings on here...i'll e-mail you the rest of my comments...
P.S. i tried to sound rather professional...could you tell | |
| 27 Feb 2002 | Mage | Very good work here | |
| 3 Mar 2002 | EALGA'S MOM | Heather, I like the way you paint with words, I believe that's what poetry is all about. As for your spelling, practice makes perfect, so keep working at it. I enjoyed the surprise ending on "Black Feathers". | |
| 5 Mar 2002 | Will brown | I think they're all good e cept try to make a different setting then the woods or forest...  Heather J. Sargent replies: "Thank You, I was surprised that someone notticed that I usally have woods as a setting though I do have a couple thats not." | |
| 25 Mar 2002 | Ealga :)> | I thought that you were only putting them up in 2's or 3's...I leave and come back and there's a whole 'nother 7 more...Well, no explination...Not even a laugh???...Mommy???  Heather J. Sargent replies: "whoops, Well I felt like adding all my poems at once. so I did." | |
| 15 Apr 2002 |  Anastasia I-Morn-Gwathren | You have some really good work and your spelling is OK almost everywhere... Well, of course, I'm not a big fan of the modern style poetry, but sometimes it's nice to read for a change. Keep it up! | |
| 31 May 2002 | Tara Jane Taylor | You have some nice work here!
Don't worry about the spelling, it isn't too bad. Besides, I'd be lost without a dictionary!!! | |
