| 22 Sep 2006 | Emma Kathryn McDonald | Loading...For the love of Venus, that was amazing!!! I cannot believe you are so young yet create art such as this! You have a gift girl, DO NOT let it go! Damn it, I'm quite jealous now, lol! Well done! Lotsaluv, Em Rachel ´Saya´ Lamine replies: "Thanks so much! I rather liked this little piece myself. Usually I hate all my writing, but this one I liked and that is pretty unusual, beside for the fact that it had no plot... >_< Ah, well, I had fun writing it anyway. And thanks again. I will definately keep on writing, though I'm kind of going through a little bit of writers block right now....~Rachel~" | |
| 22 Sep 2006 | E. Phillips | Loading...0_0 Wow. 0_o Just...Wow. First comment, woo! Rachel ´Saya´ Lamine replies: "Wow, in a good may I assume?Thanks for reading!~Rachel~" | |
| 26 Sep 2006 | Désirée Dippenaar | Loading...Oooh... this is short but beautiful!! ^^ I like your use of language here, and all the nice descriptions of Corrigan's feelings. Rachel ´Saya´ Lamine replies: "Thanks so much Desiree! I always love your comments. XD Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed it.~Rachel~" | |
| 1 Oct 2006 | Stephanie Rennolds | Loading... | |
| 27 Sep 2007 | Heidi Hecht | Loading...That's a lovely short story. You sure have a talent for description. | |
| 25 Jul 2008 | Kelsey Lynn Reed | Loading...Very nice ^_^ It gave me the shivers but in a good way xD like everyone has said, wow and you have wonderful description...I envy you for that xD I’ll be back later to read the rest of your stuff ^_^ Rachel ´Saya´ Lamine replies: "=3 Thanks, glad you liked it. Its been two years since I wrote this. I can’t even believe that. Its insane." | |
| 2 Aug 2008 | Kirstin Bell | Loading...I love writing that is descriptive, i find youdon’t always need a concrete plot, the images are a story in themselves. Beautifuly written. Rachel ´Saya´ Lamine replies: "=3 Thanks. I wrote this about 2 years ago (which is insane for me to think about) so its not one of my best pieces. Glad you enjoyed it. Covenant Waters is my most recent piece which I’m currently working on. The going is slow, but it is going, which is more than I can say for most stories I write." | |