| 27 May 2005 |  Gwendolen van der Linde | Hey, remember me, Gwen, who loved Revelations of Death?? Great to see you've got your page again. Um, I'm no alowed to spend a lot of time in the internet, so I'm printing out the Fire Wing prologue and first chapter (don't think that was up before, was it?) and will comment on it as soon as possible. In the meantime, it you like, you can have a look at my new stories  See you Gwen  Jordan Schotz replies: "Wow, thanks a lot for the hint. I felt so stupid...lol. About the reply you left me on your page, I think i will write something about wind. Hmm...I'll try to do it soon, maybe tomorrow. Thanks again for the comments, and I'll try to read more of your stuff soon! " | |
| 15 Jun 2005 | Adella | Hullo. I just finished reading you revelations of death and would like you to know I am now a fan. I really enjoys reading about supernatural things like that and I encourage you to keep writing. (PS. It's nice to hear from a someone who knows what ska music is LOL)  Jordan Schotz replies: "Lol, thanks. Yeah, ska is cool; as a band nerd, I enjoy listening to the different sounds and instruments and picking out the different parts ^_^" | |
| 24 Jun 2005 |  Jamie M. Arenas | Read Haunting and Revelations of Death, and loved them both! I bow to your ability to end things, something I am utterly incapable of doing. ^.^ I hope to read more at some future date when I'm not so tired I can barely keep my eyes open @_@  Jordan Schotz replies: "Lol, thank you! I'm glad someone finally commented on my Haunting story! I've got the next part of it coming soon, the ticket is being processed as I type this.... Thanks again!" | |
| 29 Jun 2005 |  Jamie 'ThunderClash' Riggott | I really like your Firewings story, it has a brilliant story line to it. Your characters are very unique too. Personally I do think some parts of it can have a tiny bit more detail, but it's still very good. I can't wait to read more.  Jordan Schotz replies: "Hmm...I'll try to look for the parts I need to add detail to, thanks! " | |
