"The Devil Inside" by Marleen Smits

his expression and hands position say these: "hm i wonder if... no, not there... darn where is she keeping her wallet?"
Its very good drawn, the bodies are nice, the girl’s position is good and so is the guy’s upper arm. For a better impression of not letting go try making both to not let go. Move the arm that’s on her but up to her chest and add a tighttning effect, Bow his head a little more on the diagonal like he would be crying on her and spread his wings. The tail is good as it is. Also add a stronger wind effect in the opposite direction and make a few shining drops of tears fly in the direction of the wind. And if you do that i think it will come out incredible

Marleen Smits replies: "Hmmm yeah you’r right... I am going to remake this one. He was fun making the 1th time, so why not a second? thnx for the tips!"