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"ShapeShifter" by Omri Gottlib

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'Throughout history I am known but not seen.' This story is about a shapeshifter. He lives through life where the world of magic has gone. Now he lives as an assasin, but when the dark ages come into affect the magic comes back causing havoc as people survived what he calls armaggedon. Now he must stop the orcs and many other creatures from the time of myth and magic and the hardest part is that he must do it alone with few allies.
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ShapeShifter

"Through out history I am known, but not seen."

As I think back unto the day I was given my hateful life. It was so nice to live a good life. The elves always were so kind to me, even though I was the most hated breed, but that’s cause most of us became master assassins. Everything was good until that one day.

It was a cool summer day. All was the same; the kids wouldn’t play with me out of fear, so as always I stayed home with father. We would play sword fighting and learn about magic and we would practice reading several languages. That was exactly how every day was, but this was one day I would never forget. At night there was a birthday party and surprisingly I was invited. Sitting around the fire my father and all played. I went to a tree to sit down by myself. Father came and I joined in on the playing for the first time. Playing was so fun and I never thought it would be so enjoying. Then from the darkness crawled an elf soaked in blood.

“Dark Elves, Dark Elves! Run, hide, take up arms! They are coming from the mountains,” shouted the elf.

 

Then from within the darkness came out elves with dark skin and white hair. Father had once told me about them. How horrifying they were. Father quickly grabbed my arm, and screamed, “ Run Rune!” Everything was in havoc as elves were being killed ruthlessly. Then one of the dark skinned elves noticed us and charged after us. We ran until we reached the Alter of Wreapion. Father drew the gleaming blade and shouted as he killed the dark-skinned elf. Somewhere within the forest there were more. There was a moment of silence as we heard scattering in the forest. Then I heard the click of a crossbow. The bolt flew through the air into fathers’ leg. The poison was powerful, too powerful. Father fell to the ground, weakened by the poison. Out of the darkness came out a dark-skinned elf. He appeared to be the leader. He walked up to father and sliced his head off right in front of my eyes. I screamed at rage with the loss and horror I had witnessed. Then with no will or effort I began to glow a bright white light. Then I transformed into a creature I knew would be sufficient to slay the dark-skinned elves. Rising and changing, I became a huge dragon. In their native language, I cursed them as I cast the greatest spell I knew.

In seconds everything was aflame. The rocks had melted and everything, once beautiful, was now desolate. Under me was my father. I went back to my normal size and shape. Falling to my knees I cried myself to sleep and the next morning nothing was the same again. I rose to my feet and took fathers mighty weapon, walking away from fathers lifeless corpse. That day and on I lived a cruel life. I learned to shun my emotions and I became a mighty warrior in sword and magic alike. One day I was paid to do a quick job and I attempted to fire a bolt of ice. It didn’t work and I slayed the Orcish leader with my blade. It didn’t know what was going on, but a New World began to emerge. Only some of us survived it. I was too young to remember well what happened to stop the flow of magic. Only some survived what I would call Armageddon. Tis the year 1000 and I have become that hated one. I have become a Phantom, the most skilled warrior known to modern men. There were better, but that was in the time of Myth and magic. Now all I know is that I must survive through the ages. What rare friends I come by, die with time. I must never die, sadly I must live on for some reason. I must find my purpose in life, but that will not come without me doing something. Welcome to my world…

 

336 B.C.E Macedonian kingdom

 

It was a dark night, and the king had arranged a massive banquet for his departure for Asia. It was a grand banquet, the likes that had not been seen for a long time. There were great delicacies and enough food and drink for all.

" Let him show off his might for now. He will soon be no more. The pay for this job is highly needed. I will not fail.

 

The next day…

 King Philip walks into the theater proud and full of joy.

  "Tis a good day. I feel that none can harm me… none. Keep back as I walk down the isle. Do not worry. None can come to harm me. I am the greatest king of all the lands."

As he strolled down the isle he put on a smile and walked with pride. He did not see it coming. Out of the crowd I jumped and charged at him in dark hooded cloak, which concealed my identity. Pulling out a short dagger, I ran at the king. Running at the king, I jabbed through his armor and into his gut.

Falling to his knees the king whispered, " Why?" Answering him I said, "Persia has sent me. Rest in piece."

As I pulled out the blade, the last life had left the king. Running and dodging arrows and tossed blades I fled the castle. As I ran away I dropped a body of a dead man in order to trick them into thinking that I had died and continued until Persia.

****

When I had arrived at the Persian capital, I continued to get my pay. Approaching the towering castle, I could not deny that it was beautiful even by the standards of the time of myth and magic. As I entered the building in a slow pace I observing all of my surroundings, as I had learned from experience that none could be trusted. Everything seemed normal to the normal man. Continuing with caution I went and approached the main chamber. Looking around once more something definitely seemed wrong. Thinking to myself I noticed shadows moving around, positioning themselves for an assault. I reached for my blade, which has served me so well, but I knew that I shouldn’t attack just yet.

Looking up at the man that had paid me half I said, " I have done what you have wished of me. They will not know that you were involved in this. Where is the rest of my payment." " We can take no chance of us getting mixed up in this Rune. You will be… disposed of. "

Throwing the dagger at the man, I jumped in the air just as the bolts were launched from their crossbows. As I ran away I jumped through the glass window and plummeted to the ground. Thinking I was dead they slowly walked to the window stepping on the shattered glass. Looking they saw me run away into the alley.

  "Run after him! He must not get away under any circumstances. Do you understand me general." "Yes sir! Let’s go soldiers move it out. Search every alley and home. This man must be found."

  Out in the streets I tossed my clothes onto the ground and walked away. Walking away I changed my skin. By the time I had left the alley, I had finished shapeshifting himself into one of the guards looking for me on the streets. Walking away from Persia, I whispered to myself, "You will pay for this act. It may go unnoticed in your history books, but you will know who brought you to your downfall. You will pay."

 

September 333 B.C.E

 

“Sir, sorry to disturb you but we have received reports that Arsames was evacuating the city of Tarsus. He intends to loot the city of its treasures, then burn it, Sir.

“What should we do… hum. Bucephlas, do you have any ideas?”

“Sir, I believe we should send Parmenio ahead with the cavalry and the light armed troops and I would like to go along with him. You need not worry my friend. I had promised myself something a few years back and I remember it like I had just said it a moment ago... You will pay for this act... you will pay. I remember it over and over. They fear me now, but they do not see through my mask. I have a new name and new looks. Now my name is Bucephalas and I am now known as him and not as Rune no more.”

“Yes, you have already told me of your mission of revenge. You still have never told me how you came to hate the Persia so much, but that does not matter. All that matters is that I am here for you and that with my help you will be able to bring them to their down fall. Not just them but we can rule the world together.”

“I’ve no such joy in ruling the world. It is too much work. I do not enjoy the life of the rich. I prefer to live the life of a warrior. Honor is my only true friend it has always been there for me.”

“Very well then, off to your quarters. You will set off tomorrow at sunrise.”

****

“Sir, Alexander has found out about our evacuation of Tarsus. He is sending troops down here."

“How many troops are there, asked Arames. “Somewhere around fifteen hundred troops, sir… they are led by Bucephalas.” “All right ready our troops. Inform them about everything and tell them to be ready to fight as soon as possible.” “Sir,” the man responded.

“Everyone, ready for a massive battle. We are soon going to engage in battle with Bucephalas.

"Ye know, I heard that Alexander sent here this mighty warrior he found while going in the streets. Heard he was able to defeat the guards... all twenty three of them."

"I heard this guy got dark skinned and his eyes look like bloody red balls. It hell scared a few to death."

"Tis I hear his unkillable. Also hear he is ever-living...ye think he's a vampire of some sort?"

"What’s all this babbling get to work," shouted the general.

 

Minutes later the watchman rang the bell frantically.


"Their here, their here! Get ready for battle. Arm the walls, archers lets go!

 

Looking out unto where their battle would take place. They saw the enemy coming over the hill. Leading them was Bucephalas, lord of terror. Legends in the back streets of many cities were mainly of his might in battle. As he and his troops climbed towards them they could see details. His hair was dark brown and it flowed down to his chest. His eyes seemed to glow blue. He looked slim and agile and so he was.

Riding my Black Stallion, I raced towards the city of Tarsus. Unsheathing my blade, I gripped my sword and then stood upon the horse. Charging I jumped off my horse and made a backflip, landing on the wall of Tarsus. As the archers fired in horror they missed. As I ran spreading havoc throughout Arsames troops, I was cornered. Looking around as more and more came at me, I smiled. Spinning my blade round and round I deflected their weapons. I then sprang up into the air and with a loud scream took out five brute warriors. Spinning around, I sliced the enemies apart. As I soon began to tire I called for Parmenio and his troops to storm the city. Thanks to me they were easily dispatched and the city fell under my command.

 

September 3rd 333B.C.E.

 

“It is good to see you again my friend,” I shouted as I raced to greet the king.

“Sweating, hot and exhausted after a rapid-forced march from the foothills of the Tarsus,” he laughed aloud. “That’s exactly how I am.”

“Through this city itself runs the river Cydnus, clear, fast flowing, and ice-cold with melted mountain snows. You can try to go in, but it is mighty cold and I dare say you might turn into a block of ice.”

I saw Alexander reached its bank and at once strip off and plunged in. I went to proceed to my work, when I heard screaming. Almost immediately he suffered an attack of cramp, one of the men watching had told me as I came to his aid. The rest of his aids rushed into the water and pulled him out half-conscious. He was ashy-white, chilled to the bone. When I had visited him he was more dead than alive. Hoping to keep him alive I used some magic I had remembered from the days of Myth and Magic. The flow of magic had drained most of the effects of the spell, but was enough to revive him from near death. Soon only one doctor would treat him because the others feared that they would be blamed for his death. Philip of Arcarania gave the king some quick-acting drugs, which he said would do the job. Several days passed and then I saw it.

“Alexander,” I shouted to my surprise as he came out from the tent.

“My warriors all is well. I won’t die that easily,” shouted the king.

Everyone exhaled in relief and then in unison we all shouted, “Long live the king!”

“Sir we have done nothing while you were sick any orders, sir?”

“Yes, send Parmenio, the Allied infantry, the Greek mercenaries, and the Thracian and Thessalian horse cavalry, to report about Darius’ movements and to block the passes. The rest of us shall go and win the peoples support.”

We first visited Anchialus, a day’s march west of Tarsus, then the nearby town of Soli, and then we returned to Tarsus. Two days later we arrived in Castabala, where Parmenio met us with the latest news.

 

“Sir, Darius has pitched camp at Sochi, which is somewhere east of the Syrian Gates. Sir, I believe we should move our forces to Issus and wait there, ya know, so they bring the war to us.”

“What do you think Bucephalas? Do you agree with Parmenio? Do you have any ideas?”

“Sorry sir. I am not a good strategist. I will leave it too you. My place is in battle where I have been paid to be.”

“I believe that if Darius is to come to us he will surely come through the Syrian Gates. We shall head south through the Pillar of Jonah to Myriandrus opposite the pass and wait there.”

****

“Sir, They have set camp at the Syrian gates.”

“Perfect, it’s just as I had planned. Soldiers make preparations. We will head north for the Amanic Gates, Once through the gates we shall swoop down from Castabala on Issus.”

 

“Very well sir we shall make preparations.”

At Issus…

“Sir!”

“What is it?”

“We have spotted Alexander’s hospital cases near by. What shall we do sir?”

“Take me to them.”

“Sir!”

We marched to the massive tent and then I dismounted. In a slow pace I entered, looking at every one of them thinking, what should I do with this scum. Waving my hand in the air I shouted,

“Do you know who I am. Of course you do. Every one of you have assaulted one of my officers and killed them in battle. That in accordance is just as bad as assaulting the king himself. Therefore… you will all have your hands cut off. You will then take a tour of my magnificent army and I will turn you all loose. You will go to Alexander and you will tell him who has done this. Tell him I am waiting for him. Soldier! You heard what I said right? So get a move on it. Take their hands off.”

After that we went as far as the Pinarus River and took a defensive position on its northern banks.

****

“Sir, Alexander wants you to come to his tent. It is urgent. Several hundred men have come handless to our camp. They are in bad condition sir.”

“Yes I understand. Tell them I am coming. You are dismissed soldier.”

“Sir!”

As I walked towards Alexanders’ tent right around the corner, I saw it. What seemed like thousands of men I had fought side by side with were now handless and bloody. I was not sure if they would live much longer. I began to run to Alexander, who was in shock at the cruelty of Darius. Once we had gotten all the news we immediately rushed to meet Darius.

****

 

At Parmenio river…

“As we all know our weakness lays in our infantry. Therefore our Asiatic levies will be put in the rear. In the very center I will place my Royal Bodyguards of 2,000 soldiers. I will be stationed right behind them. Flanking my Bodyguards on either side will be our 30,000 Greek mercenaries. Then on the wings we will place two divisions of light-armed Persian infantry, Cardaces. That will be our battle plan. Plus, we will add a few quick changes in the battle. This will put a lot of pressure on Alexander when he sees that his weaker side is about to be invaded by our troops. It will be a great battle. So do you agree with it brother?”

“ O’ yes. I think it will be wonderful to see it at work,” Oxathres answered to me with a bright glow in his green eyes. With that we went to our tents, awaiting our foe.

****

We marched for many days and miles. As we walked up the hill everything came into sight. Their army was massive and the many spear butts decorated with golden quinces could be seen glimmering in the sunlight. Immediately we moved into action.

“All right, lets move it. Infantry battalions keep our left flank close by the shore and push our right up into the foothills. Let’s go now! Move into line. Cavalry squadrons Hum… all right the Thessalians and most of our cavalry mass on the right wing under my command and Bucephalas’. Parmenio, you shall have to make do with our Greek allies, for the time, my friend. All right you shall keep watch on Darius’ movements. Inform me if any changing occurs immediately.”

“Sir, I’ll watch his movements like an eagle.”

Then riding on his horse at full speed he ran to Alexander.

“Sir! Sir! The Persian cavalry squadrons have changed locations. Instead of massing his cavalry opposite our right, where we thought it would be. Sir, he has moved all of his best down to the seashore against Parmenio.”

“All right. Send the Thessalians back across my left as reinforcements. Tell them to ride behind our phalanx so their movement will not be seen. Make”-

“Sir, I have urgent news. The Persians up on the ridge have occupied a projecting spur of the mountain. If I am correct sir that means that they are behind our right wing.”

“God damn it! All right. Let me think a second… All right I got it. Send a force of light-armed troops to deal with them. I am much more concerned by the possibility of a frontal outflanking movement. Hmm… Just incase send across two more squadrons from the center to strengthen the right wing. Leave 300 cavalry to watch their movement and… recall the archers and Agrianians as extra protection for my flank. On my mark we will go at a steady advance towards the archers bow shot range. Then once the horn is blown you will follow my charge. That is it soldier. You are dismissed.”

With the commands set into motion, we began to lead on. As we came within range of the Persian Archers, they fired off a huge volley, and there was so many that some collided in flight. Then the trumpet rang out and Alexander, at the head of the companions, charged at full speed across the river, scattering Darius’ archers and driving them back among the light infantry.

“Look Bucephalas! Over there. Look what we have done! Our rush has left a dangerous gap now leaving the right flank of the Phalanx open. No! Ptlomey, so of Selucus, has been killed. Go my friend. Avenge him with their blood!”

I gave a nod and charged into battle. Charging into battle I unsheathed my mighty blade as in glimmered in the mid-day sunlight. Then as I was charging a spear came up and knocked me off my stallion. My arm had been dislocated. Dropping to one knee and facing off my enemy as I recovered from the deep gash in my arm. Never had I been hit this badly in all my life. With pure rage I cut down the enemies around me and called my Black Stallion, Black Thunder, and I jumped high and on to his back. Then with all my rage I rode around the battlefield and as I passed enemy after enemy I sliced their heads off. I could feel the fear as those who saw me in pure rage ran, but they were not fast enough. When I looked back I saw many dead lying on the ground. I still was not satisfied. I charged In with my now black, bloody arm and I continued to kill.

****

  Meanwhile I (Alexander), having rolled up the Persian left wing, now swung my wedge of cavalry inward against the rear files of the mercenaries and royal bodyguards. From this moment my men and I strained every nerve to kill or capture Darius. The great king offered the best focal point for any further resistance involving all the provinces of the empire. His loss would cripple the Persian cause. Besides, the vast majority of his subjects cared little who ruled them as long as their own local interests were left intact. I would rain supreme over Persia.

“Brother sand back. I will not let you fall in battle. I shall defend you till the end. Long live the king!”

Oxathres, Darius’ brother, leading the Royal Household Cavalry, fought desperately to protect him. Dying men and horses lay piled in wild confusion. As my men and I charged through his bodyguards, we cut them down. I received a wound in my thigh, but I still pressed on my chase with all the power I could muster. I could see the fear in his eyes as death could be tasted on his lips. He looked around desperately he found a new chariot and he boarded it, running away at such speeds that the chariot almost flipped over. Looking around I noticed that my other troops needed help. I screamed out, “Turn the whole right wing round in a wedge into the center,” as I cut down another enemy soldier from up on my horse. With great effectiveness against the mercenaries’ flank, we drove them out of the river with heavy casualties.

****

“ We have lost,” Nabarzane, general of Darius, whispered to himself.

“Sir! Darius has fled the battlefield.”

“I think we should do the same. Soldiers, move out! Retreat!”

As they began to retreat they were encumbered by their heavy scale-armor and my Thessalians harried them relentlessly. They soon became rout. We went searching for Darius and only found his royal mantel and his insignia’s which would identify him. Along with this was his shield and bow. In my opinion the battle of Issus was a magnificent victory, even though Ptlomey was killed along with many other officers.

****

During the battle I went into a killing frenzy. Soon the battle had almost ended and I was still swinging. Alexander came and hit me with the flat side of his blade. I woke up in my tent, my hand completely useless until it heals.

CHAPTER 1

The Pains of the Heart

June,10th 323 B.C.E.

“Sir Alexander wants you.” “Thank-you soldier. You are dismissed.”

I began to walk to Alexander’s tent. When I had reached his tent I stopped and took a deep breath. Entering I looked all around. Things were not full of life as they always had been.

“Come here Rune,” Alexander whispered. “Yes my good friend. What is wrong? You look bad.” “My good friend I have been poisoned. It is too late for me now. I will…(cough) soon cease to live. I cannot stay with you my good friend, but know this. I will always be for you here, in you soul. Good by Rune.” “No! I can heal you. I can keep you alive. Who has done this to you, please no. I will heal you. You can’t die!”

“ Iol…Iollas knows. Your… healing… cannot undo… such powerful poison.”

Alexander’s lips moved to repeat his last words. I could only make out several words, “see you soon.” As he lay there lifeless, a tear had left my eyes. The last time I had suffered such a loss was when father was killed. Why, why does this happen to me. Why did he have to go, I asked myself. Then one thing had struck me. I would honor his death. I would avenge him.

It was nighttime and I was thinking to myself. I thought of the last time Alexander had met Iollas. Then I remember the banquet hosted by his friend, Medius. I immediately headed to his manor. It was early morning and the morning dew upon the soft green grass wet my shoes. I stealthily ran to a tree near the manor and climbed up. Looking around I noticed there were many guards around the manor. I then smirked at the thought of how easy it would be to get in. From the tree I jumped onto the roof, keeping down low so that none could spot me. Then I headed to an open window I had located on the left side of the manor. I shapeshifted into the smallest form I could attain, which was a cat. The loss of magic greatly affected my shapeshifting and it took some time until I could attain the form. When the lights in the room were shut off I jumped in. Then I ran to the corner of the room and shapeshifted back to my normal form. I put on my clothing and walked to his bed. I put my hand over his mouth as I woke him up. He screamed but none could hear. I picked him up and turned on the light, showing him my identity. Following that I tied him down. When I was finished I pulled a chair from the corner of the room and slowly sat down, all the while staring at him. Sweat began to beat down his face.

“Do you know what happened to Alexander? Do you,” I questioned “I, I… am sorry. I was silenced. I would have been killed if I said anything. I had no choice,” he began to cry. “Who did it tell me and you will live. I will provide you protection that you cannot buy. If you choose to not tell me, you will not live and then you can tell Alexander hi on the way to hell.” “It was Iollas and Cassander. It was a conspiracy between them. They disliked him and got rid of him. You can find both of them at Renee’s bar. When you have taken care of one of them, return here. One of my men will take you to the others home. Vengeance is sweet. Make them suffer.” “Count on that,” I whispered to him. I walked to the window and jumped out, landing graciously on the ground. I had left as quickly as I had entered.

I headed to Renee’s bar and I walked in heading right to the corner of the bar. I then saw them happily talking and laughing. “Well my friend, right about now they should find Alexander dead in his tent. Cheers,” shouted “Well my friend, right about now they should find Alexander dead in his tent. Cheers,” shouted Cassander. “Amen to that my friend,” responded Iollas as the two met glasses with a soft cling. An hour later Cassander headed home drunk. I followed his carriage on foot all the way to the manor. I stopped to catch my breath and ran for the nearest cover. Looking at his massive mansion, I could find no trees, and I wasn’t sure if I could get in. Then I remember my grabble hook and a honed in on the manor. I came up to the wall and with one great swing hooked the top of the chimney. I climbed up with ease and then brought the rope up so it would not cause distress. I went for the nearest window and broke the lock. Slipping in I heard someone coming. I closed the window with no sound and climbed the walls to suspend myself right under the roof. When the guard passed under I jumped on him and knocked him uncontious. I continued checking each room, all the while, not making any noise. Then I finally found his room. I silently shut the door and turned on the lights. I walked to his bed just in time to appear when he first opened his eyes. I covered his mouth just in time. I then moved to his face and asked him did you kill Alexander.

He responded saying, “ So what of it. I killed the man. Anyway, no one will miss the man.” “Well I miss him,” I responded as I brought my face up to meet his.

His face had gone pale. He then started to sweat and tremble in fear. Looking at him once more I gagged him and I unsheathed my blade. With a quick swing I cut his arm off and his screams were not heard. I picked up his arm and showed it to him. Then I did his legs. Then out of pity I decided not to leave him like this to suffer anymore and I cut his head off. Walking out of the room my blade was stained with his blood.

I waited for a few days until I was sure that the news had reached Iollas. When night came I snuck into his mansion with ease. Walking around the house the footsteps of my followers could easily be heard. Within minutes I located his room. I knew he was in there, as I knew were many guards, but I was ready. I slowly opened the door and turned on the lights. Right in front of me was Iollas and at least fifteen guards. Then I noticed one of the guards holding a man. It was Medius. He was alive and scared. I gave my word to him that he would be safe if he told me who did it.

“Let him go,” I demanded of them. With lightning quick reflexes I unsheathed my sword and brought it up to Iollas’ neck. “Let him go now.”

Then as Iollas gave them the ok they released him. He walked towards me and then I felt a sharp pain in my stomach. I them felt very weak and when I Looked down I asked him why. He answered saying, Well its obvious you see. As I told you once already. This was a conspiracy at MY banquet. Now if I truly wanted to… I could have kept them out, but oh it was too tempting to not take all that gold. Then while Alexander was drunk he told us all about you… Rune. So as you see we were ready for you. If you went to I or Iollas, we would have done the same thing. I would be the one to live and well Cassander would die. By the way, there is one thing I want you to know before you die from my magical blade. I enjoyed killing your father. Yes it was I. If it was not for my ring that spell of yours would have killed me, but I survived and now I am here to finish the job.”

With all the rage building up in me, I kicked him aside and pulled the dagger out. I quickly healed it with one hand while holding the sword up to fend off any attacks. I pulled out one of my daggers and tossed them at the guards, killing them.

“So you must both be Dark Elves and you guys used Cassander, who was a human.” “Exactly,” responded Medius as he and Iollas launched themselves at me.

Fending them off with my sword and Iollas’ magic dagger, I hit one of Medius’s short swords, knocking it out of his hand. Sweat beaded down my face as I worked hard to keep both at bay. I jumped over the bed and out the window. Iollas and Medius followed. Now outside, I had more room to fight. As they rushed at me, I charged likewise. When we met sparks clashed with the singing of our blades. I then decided to concentrate on getting the two a distance apart so I let my guard down. I then threw one dagger Medius’s way, knocking him off balance for a moment was all I needed. I brought his dagger deep into his heart and then I felt myself flowing with energy. I felt like I was at my peak of power, stronger and faster than ever. I brought up my blade just in time to block an all out assault, fueled by anger at his master’s death. On one knee I got up and fended him off with ease. My speed now surpasses his by far. He now had begun sweating and screaming in protest. “Now you die,” I screamed as I blocked with my blade and brought up my dagger into his gut and twisted it, sending him into a flurry of pain as his life force left him. Then I once again felt refreshed like I had been just after the killing of Medius. From then on I called the dagger, Soul Breaker.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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23 Nov 2002:-) Joshua Williams
*does first comment dance* Am I the first to read this story or something? This was good, but I noticed several typos, which are typical of doing a story on the computer. One such place was when his father was killed, the two words on either side of rage should be switched, and when Iollas and the other guy were doing a toast to their victory, you have it pretty much posted twice.

:-) Omri Gottlib replies: "Well your not the first to comment on this but you are the first to comment on this page. Ill try to fix the mistakes"
5 Dec 200245 IvanaLickAlot
Well this was kool. Yup it was. Story was kool.
6 Dec 200245 Delavan
Dude this story was awesome!! I can't wait to hear more keep up the great job.
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 • Keywords: Boy, Dragon, Girl, History, Magic, Sword
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