|13 Sep 2003|| John Teall|
I like old stones
more then old bones
the strainger the place
the more it is home
|22 Sep 2003|| Andrew Cryer|
Hmm..I have no idea what the above means....so um..
I like the dynamism here. You seem to be pretty good at shading so im not sure what pointers to give you. The only thing I could suggest is a more thurough three dimensional representation. Its as if you are drawing woodcuttings. Now, thats pretty impressive in and of itself-but to make the characters look truly 3d....you need to give them more depth. Try adding places with darker tones-perhaps show more shadows being thrown(light is towards him...and yet no shadow on wall). Now...all this is just advice-your work reminds of stuff done in the old days of Games Workshop-which is what ive always tried to do as well. Very well done. Andreas Reo Melmer
replies: "Thank you a Lot for your very productive critics Andrew ! Youīre right, with all you said, but I have to mention, thatīs a very old oicutre, as you can see, I hadnīt even had an idea of shading metal, a technique you showed me .But Iīll try my best to use you advice !"