Hey Paul, nice to see you getting your writings down and in this gallery! Sorry I haven't written much, my computer has crashed in the worst way (lost everything on the hdd) still trying to get things working again! Anyway I just poped by to say hi and hope everything is going well. Your poems are very cool, will come back and read more of your pirate story later!

I love you lots, you are the spiffiest writer! You are so cool! Bye sweetheart!

Very good, although sombre poetry here. Your artistic side comes through in your writing.

Hey Paul, some nice stuff you have here, it might do for a little more description, but overall really good. Maybe you should divide your poems up a little bit...I really liked the one called "Sitting in Fear of What to Come". I like the mystery in it, begging someone to come and be with the speaker.

Hello all I am honored to have my writings pick to be the writer of the day. I need to update it a bit. Considering im nearly 23 now. Lol please leave comments I would love to hear them

Guess no one have stopped by in such a long time...
well, i liked your 'nakedness' and the fact that you were brave enough to flaunt your feelings... that must be freedom of speech...

I am jealous. Give me your talent. Please? You should post many more so I may read them. You are very talented. I know people think that you write depressing poems. I used to write very self condescending and destructive poems. My friends would always tell me to write happier things. One day I wrote this poem about the destruction of the world. My mom thought I was depressed and for weeks offered to get me professional help. If they are reflective of your feelings then I am glad you are not afraid to show how you feel. If not, then I understand how it means to be misinterpreted. Trust me, you are good. Do NOT by all means stop writing for anyone or anything. Life is precious and portraying different realities of it may be difficult but it is a joy that many try to share. I am just a passerby here in Elfwood, so you may catch a few glimpses of my comments here and there, but nothing of mine.

Like your poems. You should try writing a story-poem or even better u should write a story. You might like my work im not really sure but anyways check it out.

Cool work, nice edge to it. Liked 'Driven' lots.

Your work is very beautiful, an inspiration. Though much of it is very sad. I hope this sadness is one you notice in the world and not one you feel personally.