| 1 Jul 2000 |  Crissy Gottberg | Love this story... tell me when you get a new one posted. And your chars are wonderful. Read my comment. | |
| 25 Jul 2000 |  James K. Bowers | Haven't the time to read these yet, but will be back... Would like to see some poetry here (and just for the record, I think poetry takes much more discipline, but perhaps less patience)... Hmm, I think writing stories takes more dicipline but then I'm better at poetry really. | |
| 26 Jul 2000 |  Stephaine Morris | I aren't very good at commenting about how people write storys as my English skills are pretty poor, but I can say this you are certainly able when it comes to writing... I hope to see lots more storys here in the future and will be checkin back soon....(nows when you run for cover and hide while I aren't looking) | |
| 5 Apr 2001 | Brian | *whimpers annoying waiting for at least one finished story* You are doing a great job so far.. I just wish you would stop writing beginnings of stories and ever finishing them. You are a great writer, keep up the good work. Don't hold your breath, I always get bored of a story before I finish it. I guesss I haven't come up with anything interesting enough yet. | |
| 7 Jun 2001 | Andy Willis | I would like to say to anyone who comes here that they will find brilliant work. And "Payment" is as good as it gets on Wyvern, in my opinion at least.
Love Andy. awe, thanks, that's really sweet. Payment has a lot of work still to be done, but I'm glad you liked it anyway. | |
| 17 Aug 2001 |  Lisac3 | I know exactly what you mean about being afraid to write about characters that are so intensely real to you. I think knowing the characters makes it easier to write, it just flows out and I don't have to think about it. I don't know how good they are technically, but I've been told they have a very intense energy. My point is, don't be afraid to write, just let your characters take you over, and write down what happens. Anyway, I'm going to stop babbling and read your stuff. | |
| 9 Dec 2001 | Rachel N. Bobbitt | Ha! I know *precisely* how you feel about characters you have much too clearly in your brain to communicate perfectly-- of course, I'll have to tell you how you do *after* i read through some of your stuff...  | |
