| 4 Nov 1999 |  John Hamblett | Would like to see the rest of the story added but looks really interesting so far. | |
| 7 Jan 2000 |  Ken Lim | I enjoyed the read - looking forward to reading the rest of it. One thing though, there are mentions of drow and half-elves, etc. and while most ppl would know what they are, you mention something about 'space', and explaining what half-elves and drow are will help fill it out. Just a little advice you can ignore from a master of waffling-on.  | |
| 15 May 2000 | Bård,Norway | Mail me lovely.  | |
| 1 Sep 2002 | Laura Thornton | Hey, i really loved reading yr work, its really good. Altho i usually stick 2 art i hav decided 2 giv writing a story a go, hope it turns out good, like yrs! | |
