| 16 Dec 2007 | Rochelle Green | Loading...Well it seems that there's a lot of dynamism going on - the love-hate theme is totally evident! However the picture is detailed to the same level all over, so some details/form are lost. The main figures disappear into each other/the background. Just a bit of refinement on the shapes, and attention to light and shadow might help you to bring them out more. But I think this is your first problem - it's hard for people to understand your message if they cant decipher what the picture is. | |