| 30 Sep 2002 |  S. Kocurova |  dance like an elephant, so I shan't disgrace your front page...oh, well, why not *first comment dance*: Hey, we're neighbours! Wow  I've read all your story here: it's very interesting and your style is flowing and easy to read (I think maybe one more edit before you post would be good...just one typo can spoil a lovely sentence). As to the plot, there's not much of it here, but I'm already hooked...post more soon! Keep writing!   Jennifer B. Tomczak replies: " Thanks for commenting! Ugh, I know I should edit more but I haven't really got the time, nor does elfwood, it seems. You like it? Creepy. Yeah, no plot yet. Yes, I noticed. I'm still working on how much info to give the readers. *laugh* Since I wanna be a young adult writer I'll take "easy to read" as a good thing. Oh and be harsh! Leave as many comments as you want and like I've said in my info, I LOVE advice. Give me as much as you can." | |
| 25 Oct 2002 |  Heather Michelle Milner | I found you! haha told you I would find you! hehe anyways... I like you story... You need to do more! Mhm..  Jennifer B. Tomczak replies: " I knew you'd find me, it was only a matter of time. I can't really write alot anymore since I gotta go to school for so long and then the bus ride home but I try and update once a week." | |
| 9 Jan 2003 | Lilly | I only discovered this web site yesterday by chance. I have read most of your story, which suprised me, as I wasn't expecting to. I guess this was because I was simply browsing and seeing what the site was about. I have studied English Literature and Theatre Studies and found your writing very visual and dramatic. Your work is very descriptive and emotive. It would be good if you could find more time to work on it as I think you have great potential!  Jennifer B. Tomczak replies: " I jus' updated Part2. It's great to have someone who isn't my friend comment, since I never know if my stuff is actually good or if they're jus' saying that so they don't hurt my feelings. Thanks so much for commenting, and boosting my ego." | |
| 10 Jan 2003 | Heather Michelle Milner | Woohoo Jenny!! Yay you got writer of the day!! =D Good Job!! I love your story! I want to read more I hope they hurry and send your update through =)  Jennifer B. Tomczak replies: " It jus' went through, if ya wanna read. Sorry I'm not in school today. Bum knee." | |
| 10 Jan 2003 | Staar | Boo, you are amazing!! Congrats on getting Writer of the Day! See!!!!!! I told you that you were good. Now just put your art up!! Dove You - your Staar  Jennifer B. Tomczak replies: " Thanks sweets, your always my best supporter." | |
| 20 Oct 2003 |  Kate 'The Pirate' Riley | Hiya please update! I wanna know what happens to Maeve! Oh and I've updated the Lost Princess if you're interested xx Jennifer B. Tomczak replies: " I'll update soon, jus' been too busy, and too annoyed with Elfwood. Yay! I'll go read." | |
| 3 Aug 2005 |  Debbie Newcomb | You have very good writing, and I don't even know you so I'm not just saying that. If I thought you were crappy, I'd let you know. Soooooooooooooo when exactly is your evil school gonna give you the time to work on this more. (I bet you didn't start August first though, stupid year round....*shakes fist at school district*) Yeah, that's about your writing.... I'm gonna go now bye!  Jennifer B. Tomczak replies: "So, I'm not crappy? lol, thanks! I've already graduated but the school I did go to started in early August, I'm not sure which day. I went to a charter school. Thanks for the comments, I will have to go leave you some." | |
