| 10 Sep 2005 |  Steph Salt |  Loading...Interesting idea Benjamin, and very good if you've only just decided to draw or paint. My advice is to look for tutorials on anatomy drawing, and posing your characters though. But really the anatomy isn't very far out, it's just that she is posed very stiffly. It's not realistic to pose such a character in an artistic pose, but you are creating art so it's excused.   Ben R Sloan replies: "Thank you very much for commenting! Yeah, I havent been drawing long at all. Thanks for the advice, I've been checking out some tutorials. I'll be sure to try to add more life to my drawings!" | |
| 13 Sep 2005 |  Kelsie Beaudoin | Loading... kkkkk.... thts kinda creepy, hhow in heck do u come up w/ these ideas! lol no its really good. I love her wings and the shading. Really great keep up the great work! Ben R Sloan replies: "Thank you so much for your kind words! As for my answer to the creepiness...the first novels I ever read were RL stine, once I finished with him, I moved on to Stephen King. So...having grown up with them, I have kind of a warped imagination,  . Thanks again for the comment!" | |
| 19 Sep 2005 |  Genevieve D. Franco | Loading... WOAH...morphine, huh? That's interesting...her left arm is missing as well, yeah? This reminds me of Anakin Skywalker from Star Wars-he had his arm and legs chopped off...Did you get the idea from that, or your own imagination?? This is great...now that I think about it, she really looks like she's on morphine...Her facial expression is sort of la-dee-da, and her eyes have the appearance of being glassy...If there's one thing you've absolutely got down pat, it's facial expressions!!!!!I love the wings!!!^_- Ben R Sloan replies: "Now that you mention it, it is kind of reminiscent of Anakin...No, I wasnt thinking of him at the time, but nifty nonetheless! Thanks for the detailed comment! *gives comment of the day award*" | |
| 25 Sep 2005 |  Wendy Bittnerová | Loading... AAAHHHH! What a terrible/wonderful idea for a pic...*shivers* I agree with the first commentor. Her anatomy isn't too far off, she's just a bit stiff...but you can overcome that with practice. The idea more than makes up for the inexperience...very creative. *more shivers* Ben R Sloan replies: "Thank you very very much! (You made TWO verys this time!)Sorry about the shivers! *turns up heat* " | |
| 25 Sep 2005 |  Jenny Schreiber | Loading... WOW! That is really interesting idea.. I can see you improvement on a female body! A little suggestion - the eyebrows should be thinner and their color should be as the hair color (more bright in this case) - that would give her more female features. I really like that clothes design and their shading is SOO good! Nice wings too. Conclusion - very creative and good drawing. Ben R Sloan replies: "Oooooooh thank you for pointing those things out. *smacks self* She uhhh...died her eyebrows with super umm...scifi...goop. Yep!" | |
| 26 Sep 2005 |  Laff Masta | Loading... Quality of drawing is terrible. Ben R Sloan replies: "Well...I had no scanner so I had to take a crappy picture. I'll get it scanned here soon." | |
| 27 Sep 2005 | Julia Meng | Loading... *points to person above* I'm hoping he meant the actual brightness/resolution, not the drawing level! it is sorta dark, but there are a lot of programs you can use to fix the contrast and stuff. teh idea for this is cool, but like everyone else said, i think there are some anatomy issues. i would try curving her waist a bit more for a feminine look. teh shading on her breasts look good. Ben R Sloan replies: "Thank you very much! Curve waist more...critique noted.Thanks again!" | |
| 28 Sep 2005 |  Jessica Warner | Loading... "She doesnt even feel that her legs are missing as the mechanics on her suit pump morphine into her body." WHAT? That is CREEPY...yikes, surely she'd feel a nasty thump and a whole lot lighter...but no pain...it'd almost be worse if your mind was clear and you could see bits of you missing... My apologies, sometimes my imagination seizes on a thing against my wishes. Ben R Sloan replies: "Thats fine. Would it make you feel better if I told you the man who did it boiled her severed legs, ate a small section, then had the lacerated remains delivered to her doorstep? Dont you feel so much better now?Lol thanks for commenting!" | |
| 18 Feb 2006 |  Elizabeth J. Schlosbon | Loading... Creeepy!  Good use of shading and imagination! Keep it up. Ben R Sloan replies: "Thank you Mizz Elisabeth, ma'am!" | |
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