| 30 Sep 2005 |  Larry N. Morris | *paces through the stately steps of the archaic Elven rite known as the First Comment Dance* Welcome to Elfwood! Yes, this is the place we come to have fun....and to improve out writing. We do that through exchanging comments and crits. Comment on the works of others and most will return the visit. Good cess and good writing.   Loryne Andawey replies: "Thanks for adding your comment!!!! I really appreciate it. Don't worry, I'll comment on other writers. As a matter of fact, I already have. I'll make sure that I comment on yours though. Watch for me on your comment page." | |
| 30 Sep 2005 |  Lovlyn Andawey a.k.a.Dragonet | HI HI HI!!! This is your sister Lovlyn!!!! YOu're in ELFWOOD FINALLY!! I BEAT YOU! Oh, yeah... your stories are amazing. Keep it up. XD  Loryne Andawey replies: "So what if you beat me into Elfwood? Do your work and leave me alone!!!!I'm just kidding with you, you know. Anyway, upload that sci-fi pic you wanted to submit. I'm sure there are going to be lots of comments. Hopefully they will be nice and constructive." | |
| 10 Oct 2005 |  Ryan 'Saint' Stringer | Keep adding to the collection Loryne - creativity is a wonderful gift! Come check out the updates to Truestar's Fire when you have a chance! | |
| 4 Nov 2005 |  Ryan 'Saint' Stringer | Hi Loryne - another update to Shadow of Death has been posted - come by when you have a minute! | |
| 26 Nov 2005 |  Ryan 'Saint' Stringer | I just read Legacy Chapters 2 and 3, and I have to say I see a HUGE improvement as you go along. Please write more of this, it is really good! And by all name, spread your name around the woods a little bit more so that other people aren't missing out on your work! Loryne Andawey replies: "Thanks for all the comments you left me here in Elfwood. I completely forgot to take a look at them. Since you like the Legacy so much, I'll go about writing another chapter. I'll try to keep it interesting so that you don't get bored. I'm also writing another story, this time taking place in Scotland. It revolves around the Celtic myths of the Fey. I'll be updating it soon. Take a look at it if you want.See ya! ^^" | |
| 22 Feb 2006 |  Keith R. Bachmann | Hey man I love your stories, send me an email I have something that might interest you and your writing abilities.. sutekh_x@hotmail.com Loryne Andawey replies: "Thanks for your comment. I was wondering when I would get one. Sure, I'll send you an e-mail. Talk to you soon." | |
| 17 Jan 2007 |  Charlene 'The Amazing Bubble Girl' M. Mattson | You write so beautifully. Tell me whent there's more, okay? Loryne Andawey replies: "Thank you. I'll send you an e-mail if I come up with something." | |
| 23 Feb 2008 |  Tiffany 'Maus' White | Wow, you found my site? No one reads my stuff Let me know when you read it how it is. I’ll check your stuff out, too.  Loryne Andawey replies: "Your story about Dehna is fantastic! So descriptive. I can’t believe no one took the time to read it. Keep writing. I’ll definitely follow up on your series.
Keep spreading your name through the woods. I’ll help out too. Then, everyone will read your stories!" | |
