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Jayne Leonard

"Me and Myself" by Jayne Leonard

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This is a poem about the mind of a character I am currently writing a story about. It describes the two different mind sets she has and how she battles with the two. I have tried to encompase and emphasise this idea using direct contrast through the prose but through the rhyming structure of it too.
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Face to face we are inside,

Somewhere neither of us can hide.

Nose to nose we stand and stare,

About this fight only we care.

Me and I.

Fiery eyes, tunnels to the fiery dragon,

Received by the nightmare coldness of a lonely heart,

That’s what keeps them apart.

Me and I.

The spirited Phoenix sores above the heavens.

The warrior stands and fights, sacrifices his life.

The coward flees and takes someone else’s life,

They are only separated by the edge on a knife.

Me and I.

The Joy they’ve shared,

The love they’ve lost,

Each would have it back whatever the cost.

They are opposites as one.

Me and I.

A shout across the busy street,

A heart piercing stare,

An abusive comment,

They are both unaware.

Both Me and I want to be free but you won’t rescue me!

Now I must go, on a life long journey,

A parallel path for both Me and I.

But who will succeed?

Both.

Heart and Soul.

Bravery and Fear.

Talker and Listener.

All are me.

I am free.

←- Dragon's Heart | The Tales Of Fagelio - Chapter One - Part One -→

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8 Aug 2007:-) Jeff D. Brown
A bit confusing, but good poetry.

9 Jayne Leonard replies: "Hmmmm... Let me know what your confused with and i'll see if i can enlighten you!!"
17 Aug 2007:-) David Christopher Meredith
After reading your intro it seems like a decent poetic character sketch. Some of your poetic allusions are a bit played, but overall a decent effort.
14 Mar 2008:-) Kelsey Lynn Reed
I like it ^_^ Especially the end how you tie it all together. Very nice!
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About 'Me and Myself':
 • Status: OK
 • Created by: :-) Jayne Leonard
 • Copyright: ©Jayne Leonard. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Dragon, Phoenix, Abuse
 • Categories: Dragons, Drakes, Wyverns, etc
 • Views: 259


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