| 1 Mar 1999 |  Stephen M. Courtney | I like all three of your stories. You've got a nice tone/style and you describe things very well. I encourage you to put up more stories. | |
| 3 Mar 1999 |  Scott Ryan Holland | Thank you very much for your comments. I plan on doing more on both storylines, and am currently writing a novel centered largely around Isaiah and Adiaana's son. For the time being, I am working on a Sci-Fi story that I will post when it is done. It is comming along well, but may be longer that even I anticipated originally. | |
| 30 Jun 1999 |  Anon. | Good dialogue. Though there are some writer's excercises that may be helpful to 'fleshing'out your conversations. Work on capturing more of the reader's senses as you describe things. Watch your spelling. It may seem like no big deal, but it is! | |
