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"Lost Smyorga" by Nim White

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Lost Smyorga is the setting for a story by Fritz Leiber about Faffhrd and the Grey Mouser.

In my context the ballad was written by Mezereon Thymelaea, the elven Master Bard, from a tale told her by a retired sailing master of  the Elven Royal Navy.

(Mezereon, incidentally, is generally believed to be the elven maid of the song of that title, which was written by her pupil, Melilot the Blind Bard.)


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Lost Smyorga

 

Here"s a song about lost Smyorga

That sank beneath the sea

Where we went to trade for coral and pearls,

And a girl took a shine to me:

 

It was my first long voyage

(I was just a deck-hand then),

And she was a tavern serving-girl

But still rather shy of men.

 

Well while my shipmates caroused and sang

And drank the tavern dry,

I sat quiet in a corner

And somehow I caught her eye.

 

So one thing led to another,

I suppose it's an old old tale,

And I spent all my time ashore with her,

 'Til it was time to sail.

 

I'd signed on for the voyage and back,

So I had to leave, you see,

But I said that I'd be back for her,

And she said she'd wait for me.

 

Now the wizards of Smyorga

Were powerful and bold,

But they upset the gods of the sea,

Or so the story's told:

 

So one dark night the sea rose up

And overwhelmed the town,

And the power and pride of Smyorga

Beneath the waves sank down.

 

So when I got back to Smyorga

There was nothing but rocks and sand

Where once was a mighty city

And fertile farming land.

 

But I still dream of Smyorga,

As Smyorga used to be,

And a girl I fell in love with,

Who said she'd wait for me

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15 Jul 2009:-) Monica N. Labins
Awe that’s so sad! You have lovely rhythm in your poetry btw. I like the ups and downs. You also have this tone that is very carefree and it’s like you are a bard, telling stories. It’s very nice, bravo.
11 Mar 2010:-) Monica *Volcanokitten* Christensen
Congratulations! Your poem won the 1st place in the ’Magic Love Rhymes’ contest. 13
11 Mar 2010:-) Jonathan Bahamundi
Congrats on 1st! I like the nice classic touch to your poem
12 Mar 2010:-) Fiona Blyth
This is truly beautiful. The story telling was effortless, and evocative 2
12 Mar 2010:-) Kat McGrath
Congratulations. I had read this before the contest had been judged and had forgotten to comment. The poem is very beautiful and it definitely deserved to win.
18 Mar 2010:-) Natalie Adams
Congrats on the winning place, i loved this one so much! 1
19 Mar 2010:-) Nim White
Thanks to all of you for your kind words.
28 Mar 2010:-) Mandy marie good
That was beautiful, classical, and, well, romantic! No wonder you won the contest!
1 Apr 201045 Mitchell jordan
Tu es magnifique!

:-) Nim White replies: "merci bien!"
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'Lost Smyorga':
 • Created by: :-) Nim White
 • Copyright: ©Nim White. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Ballad, Tragedy
 • Categories: Romance, Emotion, Love
 • Submitted: 2009-07-06 19:41:17
 • Views: 1111

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