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"Berries in the Snow" by David Michael

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Another late Christmas gift for a friend, this is a rather pleasant change of pace for me. The four characters are the alter egoes, as it were, of me and 3 friends (including the one it's a gift for). Since the other 2 friends helped me brainstorm and just generally conspired with me, I have their permissions to use their characters, and after the receiving friend read her gift, she was sufficiently happy to 'grant' me permission in retrospect. So much for using other people's characters. As for the fourth fellow, well, Dameon Starwind personally requested to be in the story, so who am I to deny the rogue? He always enjoys making people happy. +)

To prove these people/characters are real (& I have their permissions), I'll even link to their websites: Ceril the Wanderer, Emerin Windrider, and the Lone Knight. There.

'Tis a lighthearted little jaunt through a Christmas forest, fully fitting of a title like 'cute' or 'sweet' or some other such sap (hehe, get it? Forest...trees...sap...yeah. Sorry.). I thought perhaps some of you might enjoy it yourselves. *shrug*

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            Dusk in the Arsendale Forest washed silvery and cool through the snow-laden branches, which held back the high fire of the falling sun.  Early moonglow drifted unhindered through the needles, gently bathing the cheeks of four travelers.

            “You do realize we’re rather dependent on you not losing your way, Dameon.”  The Lone Knight stepped carefully around an area he had just noticed was directly under a rather heavy-laden branch.  The steel sheen of his mail was darkened greatly in the thick shadows of evening evergreen, but the silver pommel of the sword at his side glinted unusually bright.

            “I never lose my way,” replied Dameon Starwind.  “I never lose anything.”

            There was a sudden loud snap as an iced log caved in beneath his booted feet, but the rogue leapt nimbly forward and landed gracefully on a nearby stone.  His black cape swung breezily about his legs as he whirled on his heels and bowed deeply, sweeping his wide-brimmed hat from his head, one hand on his slender sword’s pommel.  “See, not a thing to worry about.”

            Ceril laughed, her dark eyes dancing.  “Not even your balance.  Most impressive, Master Starwind!”

            “Why thank you, Lady Wanderer.”  Though no one could see it, he chose to wink the eye that hid behind a black eye patch.

            Emerin Windrider stopped to gaze up at the towering pines and firs, her storm-gray cape billowing lightly in the soft winter wind.  “We’re lucky to — ”

            “Oh!  Holly berries!”  Ceril’s staff clattered to the ground as she shuffled under some thick icy-teared branches to get at a squat holly bush, bedecked with berries the color of red wine. 

            The Lone Knight cleared his throat and gazed sympathetically at the Windrider.  “You were saying?”

            “Well…oh drat, I forgot.”

            “Pity,” said Dameon, making sure his hat sat properly cocked at a roguish angle on his head.  “I tend to like the things you say.”

            “It was something about the stars, that I know.”

            Starwind sighed sorrowfully.  “Of course it would be.”

            “Sorry, darling!” Ceril smiled, looking apologetically at Emerin.  She gingerly closed her bag of holly and stood up.  “It’s just I’ve been looking for some of these to go around the collar of my cloak.  ‘Tis muchly fun to dress for Christmas.”

            Emerin glanced down at her own attire: a slate blue high-collared vest, grey breeches, and high grey boots.  “I don’t think red and green would go so nice with my wardrobe.  It’s wintry enough as it is, though.”

            “It’s perfect,” nodded the Lone Knight.

            Another chilled breeze drifted through the icy air from the direction they were headed.  Dameon leapt to a larger stone and peered through the thick layers of evergreen trunks, crouching.  He sniffed the air, and his brow creased.

            Ceril put a hand on her hip and looked squarely at the black-clad swordsman.  “But you, sir, could stand a dash of color at least somewhere.”

            “What?  Heresy!” exclaimed the Lone Knight.

            “Nonsense!” declared Emerin.  “He has plenty of dash.”

            “Why can’t you all accept that we’re all dressed perfectly?” cried the Knight.

            “Of course we all are,” said Ceril, adjusting her brown cloak more comfortably about her shoulders.  “But I think even a rogue can stand to have a Christmas look.  And a knight as well.”

            “Sh!”  Dameon motioned for their silence.  He stood up straight on the stone, waiting in absolute stillness as the off-and-on wind caused the hem of his cape to whisper with his boot tops.  “Can you smell something, in the air?  Something…sharp.  I can’t quite place it.  City scents are more my game.”

            Stillness washed in as the four travelers each tasted the crisp dark air.  Their breath puffed out in white wisps that rolled vigorously before dissipating.  The Christmas sky was a dark crystal mere of infinite sparkling fish, and pearl ribbons of moonlight unfurled their glory down through the mighty sentinels of oak, holly, pine, fir, and rowan tree.  Night had settled on the Arsendale with the giddiness of a long-awaited secret.

            “Mmm…smells good,” Emerin sighed.  She closed her eyes and smiled.

            Ceril sniffed the air delicately once, twice, thrice.  Her eyes brightened.  “It’s minty…yes, minty.  And…there are some awfully sweet spices too…”

            The Lone Knight raised an eyebrow.  “Someone preparing a Christmas tea party in the middle of the wild Arsendale Forest?”

            Dameon grinned.  “Wouldn’t you?”

            “I think Ceril’s been planning one, actually,” said Emerin.  “She wanted it to be a surprise, but I could smell the tea spices from her pack as I tried to sleep last night.”

            The brown-cloaked Wanderer had started to stroll slowly in the direction of the scent.  “…there’s a touch of apple cider, I think, and…something dark, and warm, like…like warm tree sap.  Oh that’s weird, but I don’t know how else to describe it!  I start thinking of fuzzy lambs and friendly fires, and then my mind jumps to something joyously majestic, and – the smell gets stronger this way, friends – and, images of these clear, cool voices on the wind sweep through my mind.  Beautiful, angelic voices, so happy and clear…gosh, it’s making me giddy with joy.  Only it’s not my joy, it’s someone else’s…like someone’s inviting me to a beautiful, reverent…oh, I don’t even know.  To a thought, I guess.  It’s like the sudden rolling back of a darkness that had once seemed too heavy to bear.”

            Beneath the rogue’s wide black brim, a sly smile spread under his sparkling good eye as he gazed in the direction Ceril was watching.  Only white shafts of moonlight now illuminated the trees.  None of the four travelers had ever been in the Arsendale before, but Dameon Starwind had heard tales of its lore.  He pulled a wing-shaped leaf from a branch above his head and examined it in the moonlight: ‘twas a teal color richer than the finest velvets of Trufanic royalty, and the jagged edges were rimmed in glimmering silver.

            “Fairies,” he said.  His friends turned to look at him, surprise glinting from their faces in the shadows.  He laughed from the stone where he was still perched and held out the teal leaf for Emerin to take and examine.  “With no aid whatsoever from my forestry skills, at last we have reached the heartwoods of the Arsendale Forest.  They are still vast, but I am told that somewhere here the elves have their strongholds, and the fairy folk their dances.”

            “Perhaps we’re being invited in?” mused the Lone Knight.  He pointed a gloved hand towards a spot between the trees far past Ceril, where it seemed a shimmering gold light was peeking through, fleeting, flirting, like a child anxious to show you the way to a secret hideout but still trying to get there first.

            Together they all passed deeper into the heartland of silver and teal-leaved trees, following the shapeless gold light which moved purposefully, but always remained just behind the trees, shining between them.  Dameon strode out ahead, his black boots crunching lightly in the snow.  A large wooded hill arose, but the light seemed to lead them around it.  Gradually it became fainter, paler, and then it faded into the moonlight.

            “Did you lose it?” called the Lone Knight to the rogue, a few yards ahead of them.

            Dameon turned slowly around, meeting his friend’s eyes with his own, burning out from beneath the wide brim of his black hat.

            “Oh, heh…sorry.”

            A reluctant smile appeared below the eye patch.  “It seems there’s some sort of clearing up ahead.  I’m sure we’d do very well to — ”

            “Look!”  Ceril pointed to the trees off to her right.

            Emerin gasped, and her hand flew to her mouth.  “How beautiful!”

            A sparkling ribbon of purple flitted through the white moonrays, or so it seemed, dancing and skating through the branches while millions of tiny stars fell from the fast-beating wings of the fairy, who in her arms carried a long blue feather.  She seemed to take no notice of them, but fluttered right through their midst, her tiny face glowing with anxiety, as if she was late for something.  The most pungent and sweet scent of fresh berries followed her, causing Emerin to sigh and hold Ceril’s shoulder as the Wanderer bit her lip excitedly.  The fairy whizzed up past Dameon’s shoulder, where she suddenly stopped and turned in the air, as if only then realizing the black-clad rogue was standing a breath away.  She pursed her lips, looked him up and down a bit, as he smiled bemusedly back.  Then, with a puff of raspberry scent and a wild, minxish grin, she flew up and stuck the blue feather in the band of his hat, and dashed off doing cartwheels through the trees until she disappeared behind the hill where the supposed clearing was.

            Ignoring the laughter of his friends, Starwind hurried after her, stopping at the edge of the clearing.  “Ah.  Here we go.”  He peered through the trees, and his voice dropped into reverence.  “So this is what Old Man Marli meant by ‘a glitzy gamboling of giggling fluttery fools.’”

            The Lone Knight stopped in his tracks.  “Hold on, are you saying you consulted Marli for this trip?  Our lives are dependent on instructions he gave?”

            “Oh, Marli!” laughed Ceril as they all joined the rogue.  “He’s such a dear old man, I love him!”

            “Dear, yes, but stable?”

            “Most certainly not.”  Dameon turned around, tipping his newly-feathered hat.  “That’s why I trusted him.”

            “Well that’s just brilliant.”  The Lone Knight rubbed his forehead and glanced heavenward.

            “I’ll say,” whispered Emerin.  She was peering with Dameon from the trees.

            A clear frozen lake stretched out before them, wide and smooth like a mirror, and over the ice a swirling host of fairies danced, skated, and cartwheeled through the air, drawing behind them bright dusty sprinkles of every imaginable color.  Each fairy left a streak of its particular hue in the air which was reflected below, so it was as if a painter had soaked parts of a needled evergreen branch in every color of his palette and gleefully bounced it across the ice.  In the center of the lake was an island of snow and rock, from which rose as stately an authority as ever a tree was, and its glory seemed to be the greater because it pointed straight to heaven.  Its strong, richly brown branches bore the great silver-tipped teal leaves, which groaned under the weight of mounds of pure white snow.  Garlands of silver and gold hung about it, and the fairies bustled industriously about with decorations of the most inventive and delightful kind.  Some were wood, others were of gemstone and precious metals, and some…some glowed with unearthly glory.  At the highest point of the Tree, a veritable peak, hovered a simple star, burning with an inward light and bathing the entire lake with a gentle, musical pulse.

            The four friends stepped out from the trees and stood for awhile on the snow bank, gazing at the celebration before them.  A kaleidoscope of colors reflected off their smiles.

            “Well done, old boy,” whispered the Lone Knight.

            “You do us proud, Windbrother,” whispered Emerin.

            “So,” said Ceril softly to the rogue, “I take it this is your Merry Christmas to us?”

            “Well,” said Dameon, “I’ve never been much with words.”

←- A Not-So-Soft Moonlit Night | The Fay at Brightwater Cascades -→

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9 Jun 2008:-) A. Setliffe
“I never lose anything.” my oh my. not even his temper? Nope.

"The Lone Knight" I found this rather amusing throughout considering he’s traveling with friends ^_^ Ah, but he’s the only knight in the group! Gotcha.

“It’s just I’ve been looking for some of these to go around the collar of my cloak. ‘Tis muchly fun to dress for Christmas." how cute. Indeed.

“But I think even a rogue can stand to have a Christmas look. And a knight as well.” rather a useless nitpick in a story such as this, but he’s actually called a "rogue" as if it is a job description? is that normal where he’s from? and if so, what does it mean? Check out "The Twilight’s Warden" for his true background. In the context of this cross-dimensional story (see story description), yes, "rogue" is his job description, and he’s quite proud of it, thank you. It means...why, it means everything that he is.

"wind caused the hem of his cape to whisper with his boot tops." wonderful image... got to love chatty clothing. ^_^ Oh how they conspire...

"good eye" if the other one’s not good then why did he wink it before? *curious* Um.........typo?

"‘twas a teal color richer than the finest velvets of Trufanic royalty, and the jagged edges were rimmed in glimmering silver." pretty... Aye.

*beams merrily* quite a contrast, this, from "A Not-So-Soft Moonlit Night." ^_^ a testament to the spectrum of your abilities, I think... to be capable of that kind of darkness and grim violence and then this merry, playful thing... *offers handshake* I wish I had such a variety to my mind. I have tried to write light and merry things, but find it far more difficult than anything else. I have also tried to write stories with my friends’ alter-egos and have found that even harder. this was a very fun read indeed. I had a bad day, and this made me laugh and smile.

:-) David Michael replies: "Once we’ve seen the darkness, we’re more ready to appreciate the light. Aye, most everything on this shelf is different in style and tone than the others. Congratulations on picking the darkest and the lightest piece to start out with! To write something light-hearted, you probably have to not focus on yourself as much, your own feelings and such. When I’m focused on myself, I get depressed and sad, and I can write dark stuff beautifully. Then I slap myself on the forehead, think of my fantastic friends and God, and the whole world seems brighter. I’m honored to have brightened your day! I’m so grateful when someone brightens mine, that it almost seems too much to ask to be able to pass it on. But apparently, it’s not. =)"
11 Jun 2008:-) A. Setliffe
awww.... but it’s fun to see characters lose things once in a while! I’m personally quite fond of losing my mind and I quite often lose my train of... ... ... hmm. Dameon: hands back your mind Do take care, milady, you never know when you may need this.

well... ok. I’ll concede that...

*wants christmas, snow and holly* why summer? WHY?!

will do! I’ve got quite a list of people to visit and things to read, but I definitely like your work and will come back for another dose when I can.

maybe they are conspiring to try and make him lose his socks... Well, with these impious fairies around, you never know...

"Once we’ve seen the darkness, we’re more ready to appreciate the light." I couldn’t have put it better myself. I did pick these two stories at random, so it’s interesting indeed.
mm... I think... I don’t know... I think there is a talent to writing more light-hearted things. In a way, angst, sadness and rage... these things are the easy way out. Necessary, for some tales cannot be told without them, but it is easy to make a story feel solid, meaningful and real without being trite, if one slants to the darker side. Not that this is something I consciously do. I consciously seek to write stories that, while they have very dark elements and dark places, hope, love, faith, redemption and all such gifts that God has showered us with even in the warzone that is the world, shine through. Redemption, especially, is a theme I see rising again and again from what I write even when I do not consciously aim for it. But to write a truly merry tale such as this, and give it meaning and depth... perhaps I should try again, but in the past it has been hard for me. My favorite author in the whole wide world, P. G. Wodehouse, wrote comedy. I think that it takes a great deal more talent to write good comedy than it does good drama.


:-) David Michael replies: "This fall I’ll be in Scotland, and THAT will be a winter for me! I don’t really get winter where I am, and I’ve been dying for a truly white Christmas for quite some time.

Aye, I s’pose there is a talent to light-heartedness. Comedy is FAR harder than drama, I can sure say that! Angst comes easy, and is definitely the wimpy way out. I hate angst. We all have it, but it annoys the heck out of me. It even annoys my villains! Laston’s not angsty; when bad things come, he flexes his muscles, draws Rebelslayer with a smile, and beats them down. He’s almost happier when the underdog. Actually, one of the hardest parts for this piece was making sure Dameon wasn’t too angsty--because if anyone should be, he should. But his epic biography is one of redemption from an abyss of evil rebellion, and I wanted to write his fully-redeemed version here."
11 Jun 2008:-) A. Setliffe
I do know what you mean, however, in the difference in what focusing inwards and focusing outwards does to the human disposition. I am only ever a good person when my attention is bent on those around me. I think... it is a good thing that we were made to thrive on helping and loving more than being helped or being loved.
^_^ glad to give you the opportunity to pass on the feeling then. I suppose I should try to pass it on as well. hmm...

:-) David Michael replies: "Aye, ’tis almost like God knew what He was doing... Try indeed, though using whatever gifts God has given you. And I find that writing happy stuff tends to lift my own spirits as well. Tolkien wrote that Tragedy was the true form of Drama, and Eucatastrophe the true form of Fantasy. Eucatastrophe is, of course, "the sudden rolling back of a darkness that had once seemed too heavy to bear." In short, the Happy Ending. Which, in the end of things, is necessary."
11 Jun 2008:-) A. Setliffe
ah, thanks kind sir, but I promise you, it’s a useless thing anyway... *turns brain over thoughtfully* looks rather like gray swiss cheese... that’s what higher education will do to one.

I got to spend one New Years in Salzburg, Austria. Snow on castle battlements. nothing else like it! I live too far south in the U.S. to get very good winters, but we get some snow... Winter in Scotland, though, should be wonderful! If I were in Austria at New Year’s, I would die of ecstasy, resurrect myself, and die again of ecstasy. My grandfather was born in Vienna, so I have some "roots" there, I guess. More in Italy, but Vienna too. Snow on castle battlements.........argh, now I’ll be daydreaming too much to work!!!

*laughs* angst does get old. I have a few angsty charries, though most of them aren’t villains and none of them are simple angst-machines. My Millace is probably the most angsty creature, but then he’s demon-possessed and I can imagine that that would tend to make life ’unpleasant.’ Of course, he doesn’t take life lying down either, so that redeems him a bit. He’ll get over the angst eventually, I think.
*chuckles* yes, it is ^_~
it would be nice if God had thought to give me a user’s manual, but maybe that would have been too easy. "in order to write light-hearted fiction, push the green and yellow buttons at the same time, then turn the dial... "
*huggles Tolkien, which probably bemuses him much, especially considering that he’s dead* Love the man. Love him. His take on fiction and story telling is so very close to mine it’s almost scary to me.

:-) David Michael replies: "Hehe. I read all the Silmarillion and Unfinished Tales, and am soon to start The Children of Hurin. His essay "On Fairy Stories," and Lewis’ essay "On Three Ways of Writing for Children," contain perhaps everything there is to know about writing fantasy and fairy tales. Both of those writers echo just about everything I believe AND have the skill to explain such that I begin to understand myself better. How many writers do THAT? They’re amazing. Spiffy. They are the foundation of my creative and philosophical life. Well, okay, God really is, but God used them to show me how I can serve Him. Christ is Myth become Fact, and the Resurrection is the ultimate eucatastrophe of all creation’s history."
11 Jun 2008:-) A. Setliffe
heh, I did get vodka poured all over me at one point in a crowd, but it dries fast... sorry! it was years ago now, but snow of the battlements I remember with perfect clarity.

I really should read "On Fairy Stories," and "On Three Ways of Writing for Children." Argh... so much to do, so little time!
Well put. Well put indeed.

:-) David Michael replies: "Yes, you really should read them. Every fiction writer should read them, I think. Lewis’ is the shorter essay, but Tolkien’s is the more all-encompassing and the best overall. In fact, Lewis’ essay actually cites Tolkien’s as the best treatment of fantasy anywhere! How’s that for friendship, hehe. Both can be found online as either PDFs or rich text documents, free for download. Print them out and keep them wherever you keep reading materials, to pick up and read a chunk when you’ve got a few free minutes, and continue later. That’s what I did."
11 Jun 2008:-) A. Setliffe
good advice!

:-) David Michael replies: "*bows* A pleasure to be of service, madame!"
12 Jun 2008:-) A. Setliffe
now that’s a form of address I don’t hear often.

:-) David Michael replies: "Aye, even the modern gentleman often lacks appropriate style. *nods solemnly* ’Tis a sore pity. But I try to rectify that when I can."
26 Jun 2008:-) Désirée Dippenaar
Great story! I loved the imagery and descriptions - and the dialogue was very well written. Just through the dialogue you characterised the characters very clearly! The last part especially was beautiful, with the description of the lake and the tree...

A very enjoyable read~ ^^ You are a very good writer (and I’m sorry for not having come to read in soooooooo long!)

*wanders back to the world of last-minute almost-overdue homework* *sigh*

:-) David Michael replies: "Thanks, Desiree! I feel my friends somehow gave a greater gift to me than I to them, just by providing such inspiration and material as to allow it to be written. As is probably obvious, these characters are far too interesting and beautiful for me to have made them up.

I’m very overdue on lots of things, especially Elfwood reading, so don’t feel bad about that. Your homework, however....*wags finger* hehe, jk, I have no right to badger anyone about that. But aren’t you out for summer yet? It’d be horrible if you’re having to use summertime for late homework!"
21 Nov 2008:-) Laurrisa Weisse
I love how you describe the fairies. I really enjoyed this one.

:-) David Michael replies: "Thanks! Glad you liked it."
18 Jan 200945 Ceril the Wanderer
Why does it take me so long to comment on the work here? I’ll be fixing that.
I know I’ve already told you how dear this (and other stories) are to my heart, but I’ll say it again. It doesn’t matter how many times I’ve read it, I can still smell it, still see the fairy-dusted breeze color the night, and still feel the warmth of nearby friends. Thank you, again and always.

...and I was smiling extra big while drawing the Arsendale on the map. Lovely place to wander.


:-) David Michael replies: "You take so long, my dear, because you have your own fantastically great project you’re crafting! 2 But you’re welcome, and thank you, for it really does make me extra happy whenever you pop in here. The Arsendale, thanks to you, has real presence now, and I’ve made sure it’s plenty large enough to encompass many lifetimes of delightful wanderings."
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 • Created by: :-) David Michael
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 • Keywords: Fairy, Berry, Raspberry, Snow, Four, Friends, Lake, Frozen, Christmas, Tree, Forest, Color, Shiny, Wind
 • Categories: Angels, Religious, Spiritual, Holy, Faery, Fay, Faeries, European Traditions, Mythology
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