| 13 Oct 2001 |  Oishee =victim of a down= Alam |  Loading...ooooooh good-o, first comment =D
nice start, i think that "only i" would be great as a song =P can imagine it being sung right now =P | |
| 5 Dec 2002 |  Sarah Colley | Loading... Chapter 1 and 2 are backwards. The one you titled chapter 1 is actually chapter 2, and vis versa. You need to either retitle them, or change the files around, it is a bit confusing  Other then that, you have a great start here. I really enjoyed the read and see a lot of potential. I think some of the scenes are rushed and could use some expanding and details, but I imagine that will come with time. I am curious to see how this finishes and do hope our little princess restores the honor of the 1st kingdom. I will make a point to return and look for future chapters!  Christina Ruth Stayton replies: "Hhe, didn't even realize you'd left another comment here. Thanks again, most people don't take the time to read and comment on so many pieces of writing. THanks!" | |
| 22 Apr 2003 |  Matthew J Donovan | Loading... Wow! I really enjoyed reading your writings, they were really quite good to me. I think that maybe you would want to spend a little more time in the decription point of view, but your plot and hidden intention really get me going. He he he, I feel like a giddy little school girl. He he he. | |
| 5 Nov 2004 | Xantinal | Loading... I honestly loved all three of them, I love your art as well. I hope you enjoy doing it as much as I enjoyed experiencing it. | |
