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"I Miss" by Steve Doyle

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This is a vampiric poem of love.
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←- I Am My Brother's Keeper | The Last Patron of the Black Dragon -→

I Miss

I miss the shine
Of your ruby red eyes
The leathery feel of your face
Your breath on my neck
And the points of your teeth
As you come unto me for a taste.

←- I Am My Brother's Keeper | The Last Patron of the Black Dragon -→

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22 Dec 200645 Carrie Dragon
I love vampiers, there so mysterious and cunning.
5 Nov 200745 Crazy yuki93
I love vampires!!!!
They are so awsome. How bout next time right a story on vampires, i would so read it(make it romance if you do please).
Keep it up.
6 Jan 200845 Reaski
Vampires rule, and vampires can beat werewolves anyday!!!!!!
1 Mar 2008:-) Catherine N Roberts
dude that wuz flipn cool!! you got it all sumd up n2 ONE LITTLE PAragraph!! cept tha leathery face. . . kina freakie
8 Mar 2008:-) Gabby Maria Marcolin
Wow I really like it, I think it sounds a bit like the vampire’s victim loves him? Kinda creepy
19 Mar 200845 Sexymimi
i really love this poem well that’s because i really love vampires and really you did sumd it up for people who doesn’t get. THIS IS THE BEST POEM EVER!!!!!!!!!!!! hope u decide to write more!!!
6 Aug 2008:-) Lyrick
its short, well, not really sweet, and to the point. cleverly written 2
23 Sep 200845 Anon.
im not really big on vampires...i dont mind them but they dont normally stand out for me...but you made this one stand out!! i loved it...the amount of thoughts ect you fitted into this is unbelievable!! 2
10 Oct 200845 Sudductivegoddess
I think this poem is exellent,im resontly into vampires but i dont recall them having red eyes nor leathery skin,youll Know What I mean if youve read Anne Rice’s books and if you havent ant are into vampires i advise you to check them out.BTW Im finishing a story on goddesses but im thinking on writing a vamp.romance story.

:-) Steve Doyle replies: "Anne Rice’s vampires aren’t typical of what you find if you study the legends and older works like Montague Summers’ "The Vampire, His Kith and Kin" from 1928. He explains the Greek referred to the vampire’s skin as tumpaniaîos, drum-like. You’ll find different eye colors based on regional legends as well. I read a bunch of Anne’s books but got tired of them after a while."
9 Mar 200945 Anon.
chills
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'I Miss':
 • Created by: :-) Steve Doyle
 • Copyright: ©Steve Doyle. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Gothic, Love, Vampire
 • Categories: Romance, Emotion, Love, Vampires, Zombies, Undeads, Dark, Gothic
 • Views: 2095

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