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"War´s Minions" by Steve Doyle

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A shanachie is someone whose job is to record the deeds of heroes. A good one will know all the major combatants on both sides of a battle.
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War's Minions

The battle raged on the field below
Watched by the Irish king.
He saw warriors he did not know
So he called to his shanachie.

That red giant, who is he
That rides that noble horse?
The man with fire on his shield;
Who does he fight for?


He is the one called War.
We have brought him this day.
But who it is he fights for
Is difficult to say.


Those riding with him, who are they?
Have we brought them as well?

They are Famine, Death and Decay.
They have come from Hell.


And the one behind them, pray tell
Who kills all in his way;
Does he also come from Hell?

That is Disease from whom none escape.

Well, what of Glory and Honor, where are they?
Those two have left the field.
Honor and Glory never stay.
Once the battle begins they yield
To Death, Disease, Famine and Decay.


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19 Mar 200445 Heather C. Sluys
Reminds me abstractly of Saving Private Ryan :21hiver::
19 Mar 200445 D Joelle Duran
Oooooh--love the mythic feel to this one. And the last paragraph--the rhyme and the meaning there was marvellous!
20 Mar 2004:-) Miss Loraina Tubbs
*dances* oh mi gosh i really liked that one!! especially the last stanza. that was sooo totally cool and really makes you think. GREAT JOB!!
20 Mar 200445 Maisha 'Elenwyn' Foster-O'Neal
*dances around* i beat Laura!! hehe... jk jk, i luv ya tons, laura...
20 Mar 200445 Maisha 'Elenwyn' Foster-O'Neal
oooo.... o.0 i like it... but it's so... o.0 *isn't sure what she's trying to say* it's almost like a deja vu, i think i've read something like this somewhere... or something... wow, this one put pretty (um, well, CLEAR, not exactly PRETTY) pictures in my head... great imagery! i love the shield of fire... oh yah! and i agree, honour and glory do not show their faces on the field of battle... war is not a celebration, it's something that is horrible, and some make it seem so glorified... very powerful. Kudos, Steve!
Peace an glitterglue!
~*Elenwyn*~
21 Mar 2004:-) 'Princess' Laura Hewett
What? Is it some sort of feat to beat me? Or is that just cuz I took the first comment monopoly on Kara's shelf? hehe, I luve you too, Meesha! Once again, uber good, Stephen. You are a very talented author and I love reading all your stuff! Keep it up! *more cupcakes*
28 Mar 200445 Carolyn Anderson
Well, I finally made it over... Took me bloody long enough. 14 This is fabulous, as is all of your poetry. A bit heavier than usual, But i like that. It has a gorgeous message, something to really make you think a bit. Well done, yet again!
30 Mar 2004:-) Rachael Evans
Have you published your works yet Stephen? Let me know when you do, I'll buy your book!
This one *is* really good! Excellent work!
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'War's Minions':
 • Created by: :-) Steve Doyle
 • Copyright: ©Steve Doyle. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Battle, Irish, Kings, War
 • Categories: Fights, Duels, Battles, Celtic
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