| 19 Mar 2004 | Heather C. Sluys | Loading...Reminds me abstractly of Saving Private Ryan :  hiver:: | |
| 19 Mar 2004 | D Joelle Duran | Loading...Oooooh--love the mythic feel to this one. And the last paragraph--the rhyme and the meaning there was marvellous! | |
| 20 Mar 2004 | Miss Loraina Tubbs | Loading...*dances* oh mi gosh i really liked that one!! especially the last stanza. that was sooo totally cool and really makes you think. GREAT JOB!! | |
| 20 Mar 2004 | Maisha 'Elenwyn' Foster-O'Neal | Loading...*dances around* i beat Laura!! hehe... jk jk, i luv ya tons, laura... | |
| 20 Mar 2004 | Maisha 'Elenwyn' Foster-O'Neal | Loading...oooo.... o.0 i like it... but it's so... o.0 *isn't sure what she's trying to say* it's almost like a deja vu, i think i've read something like this somewhere... or something... wow, this one put pretty (um, well, CLEAR, not exactly PRETTY) pictures in my head... great imagery! i love the shield of fire... oh yah! and i agree, honour and glory do not show their faces on the field of battle... war is not a celebration, it's something that is horrible, and some make it seem so glorified... very powerful. Kudos, Steve! Peace an glitterglue! ~*Elenwyn*~ | |
| 21 Mar 2004 | 'Princess' Laura Hewett | Loading...What? Is it some sort of feat to beat me? Or is that just cuz I took the first comment monopoly on Kara's shelf? hehe, I luve you too, Meesha! Once again, uber good, Stephen. You are a very talented author and I love reading all your stuff! Keep it up! *more cupcakes* | |
| 28 Mar 2004 | Carolyn Anderson | Loading...Well, I finally made it over... Took me bloody long enough.  This is fabulous, as is all of your poetry. A bit heavier than usual, But i like that. It has a gorgeous message, something to really make you think a bit. Well done, yet again! | |
| 30 Mar 2004 | Rachael Evans | Loading...Have you published your works yet Stephen? Let me know when you do, I'll buy your book! This one *is* really good! Excellent work! | |