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Max ´the world is against me´ cottam

"House of my Mind" by Max ´the world is against me´ cottam

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This is just something i put together in one of my many moments of madness!
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←- The Darkness Approaches - Chapter 5 | The Isolator -→

House of my Mind

 

There’s a path to the door,

That leads to the hall,

Of never ending walls,

And eternal meaning.

With the light that I give,

And the guide from within,

The doors will all open,

And the house of my mind will be there.

 

In the world of the damned,

And the hell that proceeds,

With the walls all around me,

I can never see what I think.

And the fire surrounds me,

And the path falls away from me,

I will find my sanctuary,

In the house of my mind.

 

When I see you all there,

Looking lost and alone,

I will take you and guide you,

To the path that you seek.

But is the path that you seek,

The right path for you?

The path that you need?

To the house of my mind?

 

There’s a spark in my eye,

All that keeps me alive,

And if you take that spark,

I will fall for eternity.

And the wings of my soul,

Will not break my fall,

The only thing to save me,

Will be the house of my mind.

 

But when the dynamite comes,

To take away my mind,

I will never give up,

And never give in to the force.

Of the never ending hell,

And the fire of others,

Of their eternal hate,

At the house of my mind.

 

For it will ever stand tall,

Beyond any mortal form,

Will make ripples through time,

And open more doors.

So that you may see within,

In the depths you will find,

You can find sanctuary within,

The houses of your minds.

←- The Darkness Approaches - Chapter 5 | The Isolator -→

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27 Dec 2003:-) Alice Muffin Girl Smith
‘The houses of your minds.’ << I’d think it would give the song a more personal touch if you addressed it to only one listener... ie, by saying “The house of your mind”

Other than that, I have no beef with this. Do you write music, too? I’d love to hear this as a full song. ^_^

20 Max 'the world is against me' cottam replies: "i try 2 write music for it, but im rubbish! im only any gd at writing songs! but im gonna get me m8 to write sum music for it for me."
4 Jan 200445 Carolyn Anderson
Beautiful, the imagery was lovely, and it flows quite nicely.

13 Max 'the world is against me' cottam replies: "comment from swollen ego: hehehe...i try my best..plus, THANX FOR COMMENTING!!!YEYYY!"
11 Jan 2004:-) Marie Sargot
Aww this makes me so happy. You should write greeting cards ^_^ *huggles*

1 Max 'the world is against me' cottam replies: "lol thanks!"
23 Mar 200445 Isaac IsaacVII@aol...com>
Awsome poem my number one Pal!
Inside of it truth is told!
sorry bout the wryming,
but im winding down.
NicE!!

1 Max 'the world is against me' cottam replies: "ah! ma main man! ahve bin waiting 4 u 2 comment!!to all this is my best m8. u shud get a gallery for ur art!!! it |`0)(0|`5!!!!!!"
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