|20 May 2008|| Meadow Nicole Griffin|
I LIKE HER! There is a lot of character in her face and action in her stance. The detail is great in the background, especially the rocks! The shadow looks great to me, right were it should be. All in all this is a awesome and very well done picture! (i like the spider web =) Suzanne Collins
replies: "Heh thanks for your comment, I appreciate it! I should probably spend more time on this and try and get the background filled in a bit more... I’m not very patient with things like that! Thanks again "
|8 Jun 2009|| Firefilly|
I really like this picture its great better than what I can do but her left arm could be alittle bigger and the way shes holding her sword almost makes it look like she could be giving it away I think maybe if you had her swinging at something it would look better but I like the details you put in like the web and the rat runing along the wall the only thing about the rat would be that it would probly be more real for the rat to be runing away from Palyndra. great job! Suzanne Collins
replies: "Yeah I agree with you about the sword, perhaps it should be closer to her body in a defensive position. I do need practise with action scenes, I will freely admit! Thanks for the advice and the nice things you said!"