| 3 Mar 2004 | Kris Hogenbirk-Toohy | Hey, great story. I hope ther's more to come from you. | |
| 20 Mar 2004 | Ross Thorne | That makes two main characters that blatantly ignore beautiful women....except the difference is that Ninirael probably has some clue that Eilirath is hitting on him...^_^ Anyway, great story, keep up the good work! *can't wait for Ninirael to get hit by another Orani arrow* | |
| 22 Sep 2004 | Paul churchill | Yo beav's ur a gd writer i hope u keep it up anyway gd luck for the future | |
| 2 Dec 2004 | Ross Thorne | Part 3! Wooo! This is a really addictive story with lots of imagination, hurry up with more ^_^ | |
| 13 Jan 2005 | Nina Fudge | DO YOU KNOW HOW LONG I HAVE WAITED FOR PART THREE! I HAVENT SLEPT SINCE PART TWO COZ I BEEN SAT HERE WONDERING WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT! NOW I CAN SLEEP! I have forgotten what is was like t.....zzzzzzzzz | |