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E. ´Erroneous´ Szydloski

SciFi & Fantasy Fiction and Stories by E. ´Erroneous´ Szydloski

E. loves Old English, Earl Grey, and the sea.
 
 
 

The White Flame: Prologue
The White Flame: Chapter 1
The White Flame: Chapter 2
The White Flame: Chapter 3
The White Flame: Chapter 4
The White Flame: Chapter 5
The White Flame: Chapter 6
The White Flame: Chapter 7
The White Flame: Chapter 8
The White Flame: Chapter 9
The White Flame: Chapter 10
The White Flame: Chapter 11
The White Flame: Chapter 12
The White Flame: Chapter 13
The White Flame: Chapter 14
The White Flame: Chapter 15
The White Flame: Chapter 16
The White Flame: Chapter 17 (pt 1)
The White Flame: Chapter 17 (pt 2)
The White Flame: Epilogue
Brushfire I: The Spark of Life
Brushfire II: Like a Moth
In the Beginning
Poem: Dragon
Childhood of a Villain
Brushfire III: Burning Man
Brushfire IV: Scorched

 
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10 Nov 2006:-) Brandy Overby
Hi i actually have stuff up now lol i too am hopeing to get something published there's just a few problems in that. I'v got writers block and can't finish it it seems. and also...i have the spelling capibilities of a forth grader. grammer too lol but... if you still want to check it out then ya can now. (fixing to start reading twf for the third time) I love Breadon and Andy lol anyway i really hope that you have one of those brain storms ya know the kind were it's like you get hit by lightning and the words just start comming out lol i like those... they just never seem to last long enough anyway thanks for taking the time to read this

:-) E. ´Erroneous´ Szydloski replies: "My semester finally ended, so I should have time for reading and writing. I've read one of your pieces, and I intend to check out some more."
7 Dec 200645 Anja de Lange
I have no idea why but my computer seems to have built up a resistance to leaving comments! If this actually gets posted I'm really sorry I can't leave other comments!

You write very well and should really try to get white flame published!

Good Luck!

:-) E. ´Erroneous´ Szydloski replies: "Thanks so much for all of your reading and commenting and encouragement! I really appreciate it. 2"
24 Jan 2007:-) Brandy Overby
you know what lol your story came in handy today i was babysetting and the little buddy wouldn't go to sleep. I remembered one of the songs from your story and it saved me from loseing my last nerve cause it put him right to sleep lol hope ya don't mind

:-) E. ´Erroneous´ Szydloski replies: "This is possibly the best comment I've ever received! I'm so flattered that you (a) remembered one of my songs and (b) actually sang it to a child! And I'm certainly glad to hear that it helped you out. 2"
15 Mar 2007:-) Lacey Wright
HELLO, MY DEAR. Guh. It's been so long since I commented on your page. Like, like...two years. SO HELLO.

*stares in dismay/delight at all the catching up she has to do*

EEEEEEE REVOLUTION NEW CHAPTERS TO ATTACK.

:-) E. ´Erroneous´ Szydloski replies: "It's so good to see you (well, your comment... you know what I mean) again! It makes me nostalgic for the days back when I was writing TWF. I must get back into the habit of hanging around the Wood. And of updating."
23 May 2007:-) Brandy Overby
Hi. I was just curious as to how much of twf you have edited so far. and if it's just been like gramer errors you've changed or if you've changed anything completely.

:-) E. ´Erroneous´ Szydloski replies: "Thanks for asking! It's nice to know people haven't forgotten about TWF. I've edited about a quarter of it, although that amount may be deceptive. A lot of work had to go into solidifying the background information for the characters and their world, their religion, and their calendar before I could start attacking the manuscript itself. It's definitely more than just grammar errors I've been changing. I can't think of any big plot changes off the top of my head. Mostly it's been adding things and making the point of view of the writing consistent (so that each scene is told from only one character's perspective, though still in third person). Andellyn is a little less naive, but she also shows the side-effects of her socially stunted upbringing more. I've done a little bit of clarifying and fleshing-out with all of the characters, I think. But no worries, they're still recognizably the same people. I've been meaning to make a decision about something to cut from my gallery (since I've reached my 50 story maximum) so I can put up a snippit for my faithful readers to enjoy."
25 Feb 200845 Tina
Hey, hows it going? It’s been a long time since I’ve checked out your site. I’m still writing and loving it. I want to thank you for all the advise you gave me when I was first starting out. You really helped me build a foundation for my writing in the early stage. How are you fairing in editing TWF?

:-) E. ´Erroneous´ Szydloski replies: "Tina! You are so very welcome. I always enjoyed your emails. The editing has been going in spurts, which has been bad for productivity, because I keep having to look up things that I decided in previous editing sessions and other such tedious things. However, I do really want to push and try to get to the end of the draft this summer, because I start graduate school near the end of September. Drop me a line (I’ve changed emails since the last time we were in email contact, I believe, but the Elfwood page has a current address for me). I’d love to hear about what you’ve been writing these days, and I’ll tell you more about editing TWF."
9 Mar 200845 Emerald
So how’s everything going with TWF, i remember you said you were doing some editing a while back and were eventually going to try to write a sequil, which i would greatly look forward too.

:-) E. ´Erroneous´ Szydloski replies: "Thanks for stopping by and asking! Things have been a little slow, but I’m determined to get some good editing done this summer and hopefully finish the draft I’m on."
6 Nov 2008:-) Tom Solomons
Hey, long time no typey, how’s it going? I’m back, after almost 3 years!!
Looks like I’ll have some new stuff coming up over the next couple of weeks so I’ll give you buzz when it’s there. Wow, updating is exciting again!!

:-) E. ´Erroneous´ Szydloski replies: "Sorry I’ve been so long in replying. I was thrilled to get this and see that you were back! I’m very busy with school (turns out Ph.D.s take a lot of effort and time to earn) so I haven’t had much going on in the ’Woods, but my term is almost over, and I’m planning on editing like crazy over my winter break."
26 Nov 2008:-) Tom Solomons
Life is good, life is good! Guess who just got his first Mods’ Choice!

:-) E. ´Erroneous´ Szydloski replies: "Congratulations! I did start reading the piece when I got this message from you, and liked what I read, but I had to leave the computer suddenly. Once my final papers are turned in (about a week from now) I plan on going back and reading it and the other new piece (I think there were just two, right?). Congrats again! I’m so happy for you!"
1 Jul 2009:-) Gwenivere Stephan
Gosh... I really like your writing style a lot! It just slips along through my mind so easily, it’s refreshing and wonderful. It’ll take me forever and a day to read everything you’ve got up here, but I think I might have to try it 2

:-) E. ´Erroneous´ Szydloski replies: "Thanks! I hope you continue to enjoy it!"
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