|29 Jul 2005|| Katie Collishaw|
hmm very interesting.. I liked it. I love the description of the angel. Julia Anna Rill
replies: "thank you!"
|15 Aug 2005|| Brie TheCheeseGirl OīReilly|
Wow, that was beautiful. Really well done. Very visual.
*miss sassypants* Julia Anna Rill
replies: "thant was what i was aiming for! thanks for the comment!"
|21 Aug 2005|| Bianca īBiaī Tangermann|
For my taste this is a little too straightforward and romantic, not enough subtlety. But the last line, as so often, is perfect. Julia Anna Rill
|23 Aug 2005|| Inge 'Inora' van den Broek|
YAY! I luf this one too
I guess this is really inspiring @_@ (dunno if that's a good thing, I wil have even less time to comment on your stuff
Anyways, I really like the way you wrote this, it doesn't rhyme, but, who cares? It's the idea, the feelings you describe, right? (I could go on for hourslike this, but i won't bother you any longer...
I can't do anything but agree, that this is, once again, a wonderful piece of writing (do I say that correct? @_@)
^_^ I luf it
BTW, I will have to admit, this is a style I have used many, many times before, though your work is better and I'll never be as good as you... T_T Julia Anna Rill
replies: "being inspired never i a bad thing, is it? well, unless you get so inspired, that you dont know what to write anymore... thats nasty than. trust me, i know just too good!!! "
|26 Aug 2005|| Kazz Leer|
Nice, adding a little happiness for once;P. Great work Julia really love the angel bit. Julia Anna Rill
replies: "thank you thank you thank you! yeah, somehow i thought there should be a bit of the brighter side of life in here too... all is so dark i had written for a long long time, so then i wrote about someone bringing the light back in! happy thoughts! many happy thoughts for all of you!!! "
|11 Sep 2005|| Jessica E. Hunt|
I like how you took this and didn't just let it sit in feelings of despair and you took it and gave it hope great poem. Julia Anna Rill
replies: "Yeah, in my oppinion hope is one of the most important things in life!"
|19 Sep 2005|| Sarah E. Zindel aka Aurora Jordan|
WOW... I could see and feel everything that was happening in the poem. Sounds just a touch like a poem I wrote about two weeks after my father died...this is just wonderful!! Julia Anna Rill
replies: "Thank you!"
|20 Nov 2006|| Antůnio M. C. Terra|
I really liked this one. The light/darkness contrast really brings the idea of hope shining in despair. Really well done. Julia Anna Rill
replies: "Thanks a lot!"
|21 Nov 2006|| Cahirarjaeis2|
God's angels are actually always there... Sometimes we need a little helping to see them, though.
Nice poem, flowing and not choppy (which sometimes happens when writing the rythimic prose sort of style).
RJS Julia Anna Rill
replies: "Thanks for your comment!I guess right now those angels need to get a bit more visible to me... Somehow I can't see them anymore. But it is good to know that they are there, even if they won't show."
|5 Dec 2006|| Musty Zein|
Hey, just popped over to repay the comment you left.
Sweet and uplifting poem, it genuinely made me smile. Great poem, i especially love the last two lines. Nice! Julia Anna Rill
replies: "thanks! I'm glad you like it!"