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Julia Anna Rill

"Your light" by Julia Anna Rill

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An angel helps you out of you sorrow. Even when you think everything is over and it can only get worse, not better, when you are so desperate that you accept your fate, there will always be someone or something that aves you. you just have to listen.
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Your light

 

 

 

everything is dark.

there is no hope, no peace.

all alone.

 

shadows come closer.

you try to run Ė

but you canít.

 

you canít hide.

they are everywhere.

darkness grows and with it hopelessness.

 

souls starts screaming,

crying.

is this the end?

 

you give up.

you canít fight darkness,

or sorrow or fear.

 

everything is over.

you want to lay down.

to close your eyes.

 

you have to rest.

no more fighting.

no more pain.

 

And suddenly Ė bright as the sun after a stormy night,

A light rises.

Itís pure, itís strong, it overcomes everything.

The darkness flees, the shadows give way.

Itís warmth, itís safety, itís hope.

In the white light a figure appears.

Wings, protecting and fierce, unfold.

There he stands, to come to your rescue.

The only thing that is powerful enough to fight despair.

Itís the Angel of Hope,

And His name is Love.

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29 Jul 2005:-) Katie Collishaw
hmm very interesting.. I liked it. I love the description of the angel.

:-) Julia Anna Rill replies: "thank you!"
15 Aug 2005:-) Brie TheCheeseGirl OīReilly
Wow, that was beautiful. Really well done. Very visual.

*miss sassypants*

:-) Julia Anna Rill replies: "thant was what i was aiming for! thanks for the comment!"
21 Aug 2005:-) Bianca īBiaī Tangermann
For my taste this is a little too straightforward and romantic, not enough subtlety. But the last line, as so often, is perfect.

:-) Julia Anna Rill replies: "thanks!!!"
23 Aug 2005:-) Inge 'Inora' van den Broek
YAY! I luf this one too 10 I guess this is really inspiring @_@ (dunno if that's a good thing, I wil have even less time to comment on your stuff 12
Anyways, I really like the way you wrote this, it doesn't rhyme, but, who cares? It's the idea, the feelings you describe, right? (I could go on for hourslike this, but i won't bother you any longer... 12
I can't do anything but agree, that this is, once again, a wonderful piece of writing (do I say that correct? @_@)
^_^ I luf it

BTW, I will have to admit, this is a style I have used many, many times before, though your work is better and I'll never be as good as you... T_T

:-) Julia Anna Rill replies: "being inspired never i a bad thing, is it? well, unless you get so inspired, that you dont know what to write anymore... thats nasty than. trust me, i know just too good!!! 10"
26 Aug 2005:-) Kazz Leer
Nice, adding a little happiness for once;P. Great work Julia really love the angel bit.

:-) Julia Anna Rill replies: "thank you thank you thank you! yeah, somehow i thought there should be a bit of the brighter side of life in here too... all is so dark i had written for a long long time, so then i wrote about someone bringing the light back in! happy thoughts! many happy thoughts for all of you!!! 10"
11 Sep 2005:-) Jessica E. Hunt
I like how you took this and didn't just let it sit in feelings of despair and you took it and gave it hope great poem.

:-) Julia Anna Rill replies: "Yeah, in my oppinion hope is one of the most important things in life!"
19 Sep 200545 Sarah E. Zindel aka Aurora Jordan
WOW... I could see and feel everything that was happening in the poem. Sounds just a touch like a poem I wrote about two weeks after my father died...this is just wonderful!!

:-) Julia Anna Rill replies: "Thank you!"
20 Nov 2006:-) Antůnio M. C. Terra
I really liked this one. The light/darkness contrast really brings the idea of hope shining in despair. Really well done.

:-) Julia Anna Rill replies: "Thanks a lot!"
21 Nov 2006:-) Cahirarjaeis2
God's angels are actually always there... Sometimes we need a little helping to see them, though.
Nice poem, flowing and not choppy (which sometimes happens when writing the rythimic prose sort of style).
RJS

:-) Julia Anna Rill replies: "Thanks for your comment!I guess right now those angels need to get a bit more visible to me... Somehow I can't see them anymore. But it is good to know that they are there, even if they won't show."
5 Dec 2006:-) Musty Zein
Hey, just popped over to repay the comment you left.
Sweet and uplifting poem, it genuinely made me smile. Great poem, i especially love the last two lines. Nice!

1 Julia Anna Rill replies: "thanks! I'm glad you like it!"
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'Your light':
 • Created by: :-) Julia Anna Rill
 • Copyright: ©Julia Anna Rill. All rights reserved!

 • Keywords: Angel, Dark, Hope, Light, Love, Pain, Sorrow
 • Categories: Angels, Religious, Spiritual, Holy, Romance, Emotion, Love
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