You MUST write more!! I cannot wait to read the rest of the story. Congrats on getting on elfwood too!

Natasha L Darby replies: "Thanks Emmy...I should have more up soon...but you know me...soon could be....well...we'll leave it at soon"

well well well...imagine seeing you in this part of the woods...it's about time girlie...lol...I was one of the first ones to read and hear about your idea for this story and as the commenters have said...keep up the good work...it's an amazing story idea and I'm anxious to read it when you eventually get it down on paper..lol...aside from the few typos (which I have gotten to know quite well...lol) you're doing a great job...maybe like I told you before try adding a little more description in some spots...but amazing girlie...can't wait to read more ...maybe one of these days I'll actually get my stories up on here huh...lol...later

Natasha L Darby replies: ":lows loud long raspberries at M...:: If I had a better proof reader maybe I wouldn't have so many typos...lol...you know I love you girlie...I'll talk to you later...and you'll know as soon as I have the next ch. done "

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