| 15 Jul 2004 | Anonymous | I liked both stories, a little bit of refinement to your writing style and you could go far. Try using a thesaurus, it may help a bit. The stories seem to be written by a young person, perhaps this refinement will come with age and wisdom. Will await your next story.  Teresa M. Dreisbach replies: "Thanks. I'm only 21. I've been writing for a long time and no ever told me what i should use. My parents put down my writing so i did it in secret. give me some help if you can. Teresa" | |
| 26 Jul 2004 | Larry N. Morris | Hello there! Looks like you're off to a good start here. Do you have more written on these stories yet or will we have to wait awhile?  Teresa M. Dreisbach replies: " Hey thanks for the comment. Going to have to wait a little while for the next stories. Trying my best not to put rated R things within them. I'm more of that kind of writer. Write me if you need to talk about them. Teresa" | |
| 14 Dec 2005 | Ulises Rosas Garcia | thank you so much for your nice comment in my gallery, I would love to seeing one story about my chars  specially about the Dark Princess (the girl with black miniskirt grey skin and short hair), thank you so much!!!   Teresa M. Dreisbach replies: "Well. Thank you for your insperation. I've been thinking long and hard about what type of story I should do. One of these days you shall see a story about your charactors. I need to ask premission about the names to use. Write again. i shall email you my yahoo address. Thank you again! Cudos!" | |