Hello hello! *big wave* Here are some cookies for ya to munch on while I go and take a look at some of your works! I'll try to leave constructive criticism, but I can't promise anything. I sometimes get too involved in a story to stop and criticize...unless I have the handy wordpad open so that I can keep notes (lol). But I will try . Best advice I got was to go and read other people stories and leave comments, not only do you get ideas for your own writing, and a better understanding of sentence structures/grammar/etc that work in a story setting, but hopefully they'll also return the favor and comment on your own work...so here's to happy reading, cheers *clinks glass of milk to go along with cookies*