ZOMGosh, am I really the first to comment on a profile? =O *pats herself on the back while simultaneously doing the welcome Taco dance*

Hey sweet, anyone who can draw AND write is pretty talented if you ask me. I love to write, but my drawing skills are absolutely atrocious, bordering on insane. Its good that you do both. You know, exercise two parts of the creative part of your brain and leave both options open for career choices later in life. ~_^ Whatever, don’t listen to me, I spout mostly unintelligible mutterings that not many understand, so yeah.

Welcome, anyway, to Elfwood.

~Saya~

Robin Ammerlaan replies: "Thanks! your mutterings are very nice to hear
I might make an art page in the wood later "

Very cool idea...I like the way you write...nice texts, especially the origin of the paladins, very cool indeed!

Robin Ammerlaan replies: "Thanks! "

Intriguing beginning. One problem I see is with mother’s typically dying. The race would die out rather quickly. I had the same sort of problem with one of my stories, Way of the Dragon. I always knew why it worked, but a comment helped me realize I had to add the reasoning to the story, so my readers could see how it was possible.

One other hint, it is easier for your reader if you put chapter numbers with your titles, and when you name your files start at 01 and they will always be listed in order.

Robin Ammerlaan replies: "Thank you Patricia! yeah, I realise that the events in the story should be reasonable, I’ll keep it in mind =),
and as for the ’Name Numbers’ well, it comes with the next ticket I guess."

Hey neighbor just passing by to look at your stories.