Welcome to Wyvern! I left comments on both sections of ur story, its really good! I enjoyed it profusely. Keep writing! Ur very talented! ^_~

Very intriguing storyline well thought out and written. I could suggest you pay closer attention to tenses, you switch between past and present sometimes in the middle of sentences. That aside, I was quite captivated and look forward to reading more about Danie *smiles*

OMG!!! I just love your stories! Danie is cool, I can't wait to read more about the world. I haven't actually read the Alien Dice story yet, but I read the web comic of it. I plan to read the story when I have time, because it's really long. It has an extreamly captivating plot. I can't wait to read more.

Dude. I really like 'Alien Dice'. The character personality variations come across clearly, and I think the whole deal is quite well written, painting clear mental pictures. I do believe you should take note of the fact, though, that you use the word 'dice' even when you are speaking of a single 'die'. Now, if they're called dice regardless of count, then I believe they would be capitalized (grammar dictator, that's me...). And, aside from the occasional things that remind me of anime, I very thoroughly enjoy 'Alien Dice', indeed, I'm disappointed that there's no more for me to read (and I must admit, I tend to be a very tough critic). Bravo, and please e-mail when (and I do mean when, not if) you release your next chapter of 'Alien Dice'.