"Sitting fairy" by Maren I. *May* Zielke

Again, simply not enough definition to her. Make her legs and arms a little more shapely. Also, her belly button is a bit too high, and her thighs are a bit too skinny at the hips. It wouldn't hurt to bring her breasts down a few pixels, but it's not necesary.

Good job and keep it up!

P.S. -- Really neat wings!

Maren I. *May* Zielke replies: "I can see what you mean, yeah. tx"

euhm lets see well your right about the proportions her legs are a bit to small and her shoulders seem a bit male but I guess it's not THAT bad, I think for a first try it's really good just keep in mind and in this pose you have to work with perspective so limps and stuff look shorter, like in this picture with the legs *I think* they should come out a little wider and there should be more flesh on them cause there pretty skinny now and maybe same story on the arms. I hope this doesn't put you down. this is just my vieuw on the picture as a tip I'd say try using pictures and if you you it's important to look very good.
Well I hope this helps you a little ^_^

Maren I. *May* Zielke replies: "I NEED such tips. Without I couldn't become better. Thank you"

The proportions are for a fairy not a human. So if they are different that's fine. I think she is very cute. I wish you would color more of your work. The winged pony has great color.

Maren I. *May* Zielke replies: "  Thank you. I will colour more in future. I just got some really nice coloured pencils from my aunt. and they have to be used!"

Cute wings.