| 13 Jan 2000 |  Lucy Barabas | Since nobody else did this so far: Welcome to the library! It is good to see another talented writer on the darker side of the woods. I love your works. Welcome to the circle of mages of the arts. | |
| 18 Jan 2000 |  Kris 'Zabetha' Burns | citisizm?! good lord! what is there to say? i can fid no faults! [*little voice who is neer content* "check your spelling"] *kicks the little voice for daring to ruin this beautiful page* i love your work. all of it. | |
| 21 Jan 2000 |  Jen Williams | Very good. Keep at it | |
| 22 Jan 2000 | Gabriella Jönsson | Hi, I'm sorry I've only commented on a few of your poems, but I'm in a rush and just happened to click my way to your library. It's really fascinating! I'll be back! *runs away in a hurry* | |
| 24 Jan 2000 |  Rick Smith | Such a sadness in the poems I've read. Strong, beautiful sadness. | |
| 25 Jan 2000 | Guadalupe de los Santos | You are a great poet. I love the way you describe our dark, dark souls, it shows true insight. (By the way, if some of my comments are confusing, ignore them, I tend to write my first impression.) | |
| 10 Apr 2000 |  Amber Silver | *Shivers* Your poems have such a simpliness to them. You point and explain death with such grace and beauty. Well done. I loved your poetry | |
| 9 May 2000 |  Simi Rochelle Peterson | I think your work, mainly your poetry, is incredible. You seem to have quite the love affair with words. *smiles* Its splendid to see someone use such simple terms and thoughts, and twist them into such magnificent pictures for the mind. My only suggestion throughout all your peices have been towards your short stories.. and that is to indulge in them a bit more.. popping in some dialouge and a bit more detail... dabble a bit longer in certain sections.. such as in the hunter... tell us what his childhood with his mother was like.. build the mother charecter up a bit so that when she dies we truly feel for her and her son. Just a suggestion of course.. youve got a great talent! | |
| 8 Jul 2000 |  Jessecca Collins | Beautiful. Another person that a random link has guided me to. I love the poems you write. They are so simple, yet hold so much. I'm quite new here and I find my own work seriously lacking by comparison. *Shuffles off to a corner to hide from such talented people* | |
| 3 Jul 2002 | Delirious the Malkavian | Wow, down down BEATING ME BEATING ME DOWN IN TO THE GROOOOOUND!!!...aAAHH
Yeah...anyway cool | |
